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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 15, 2006 14:55:12 GMT -5
Bobby walks down the stairs an hour later to find Wolverine face down on the floor unconscious “Logan!” He awakens quickly “Logan what happened?” “Rogue she knocked me out then she left.” “How much of a head start did she get?” “I don’t know.” “What do you mean you don’t know?” “She aint go little girl strength anymore she hit me like a Mac truck! What was I supposed to do write you a narration?” Iceman dismisses his comment “I’m taking the jet and finding her.” “You can’t without me Bobby.” “Then what the hell are you doing just sitting there?”
In the jet they find her by using her communicator as a homing beacon courtesy of Hank “The Beast” McCoy they where able to find her and catch up with her in time to see her going to her destination they find that she is going into the middle of the woods where the Brotherhood are located.
Destiny a new member of the Brotherhood fold senses Rogues presence and that Carol/Cara “Marvel” Danvers has partial dominance over her body. Mystique says to allow her to come in their mutant retreat. Pyro sees her and the other new members Blob and Avalanche ready themselves for her landing. She lands and looks around with familiarity. She says “John!” and tries touching embrace him he backs away from her.
“They don’t know you Rogue or are you Cara?” “What do you mean?” Rogue asks “You are not how you think you are. A mutant extracted your essence from your body to hers. She has supreme control while you are just an echo.” “No… You’re lying” “See for yourself.” Mystique hands her a mirror. “I wanna be like I was be who I used to be.” “Mutant are never turned away… That is what Erik always said. If you are loyalty is to us Rogue and only us.” “Yes.” She says with Carol and her dominance changing.
“I feel more of her friends they are approaching in a jet.” Mystique says militantly “Kill them.”
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Post by liljean15690 on Jun 20, 2006 13:57:03 GMT -5
I hate. Jean will so luv Logan. Scott is a manipulative bastard.
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Post by teleporter on Jun 20, 2006 13:58:55 GMT -5
VERY COOL
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 21, 2006 9:40:28 GMT -5
I hate. Jean will so luv Logan. Scott is a manipulative bastard. Scott loves her and so does Logan but it was already set up that Jean loves Scott more than Logan so I don't know what to tell you. If you don't like my direction you don't have to read it but I appreciate your responses good and bad they are what makes me strive to do better.
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 22, 2006 17:40:46 GMT -5
Dark Water
Jean Grey was in a dream world droning…. Water engulfing her lungs with every breathe. She thought, was she still in Alkali Lake? (gurgle) …….(gurgle) Had she dreamed she had been saved from her watery grave? (gurgle)….(gurgle) The dark blue water consumed her with each wave crashing upon her as she fought to stay afloat darkness blanketing over her eyes with each crash. She pawed her way upward scared and shocked gasping for air. Behind her an enormous boat comes from nowhere then suddenly a hand extends and everything goes black……..
When she awakes eyes a little blurred and her. She squinted to see the eyes of the man that was staring at hers fondly. The fog disappears and she sees her rescuer he had long dark hair and was very pretty for a man in the face with a large build similar to Logan’s. Jean then sees she and he are wearing Elizabethan clothing and that she is in an 1800’s century room. He reached over to hug her and she backs away quickly and said “Who are you? What am I doing here? Where is Scott, Logan, Ororo, and the rest of the X-Men?” “You must be exhausted you where out for at five minutes that time.” “This time?” Jean said confused “You where cursed with visions of the future of monsters you called them mutant.” What are you talking about?” Then an assortment of memories of love and a life where she was know as Lady Grey comes in her mind now she somehow knew this stranger. Jean walks to the upper deck of the boat and the man follows. “I still remember… I have images of people I once knew” “Do you want them out? Do you want the monsters to go away?” “What do you want me to do?”
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 24, 2006 18:24:46 GMT -5
Who am I was I will I be?
Bobby and Logan walk through the wooded area of the Brotherhoods new secret headquarters talking to each other “It’s your fault she’s like this.” Bobby points out “You care to repeat yourself?” “Yeah I do.” Bobby stops and meets Wolverine eyes with his angered “I had as much control over what happened as you did!” Wolverine says enraged “Well maybe if you hadn’t gotten your *** beat by that woman Rogue wouldn’t have had to save your *** and she wouldn’t be here now would she?!” They look at each other very heated then Wolverine picks up another’s odor nearby his senses heightened he feels an attack “Get down!” he throws Bobby on the ground. A fire ball comes roaring to the side of him he instantly gets up and so does Iceman, Bobby, then says “Thanks.” “Pyro?” “Pyro.“ they agree then start defending themselves for unseen attacks of Fire creatures in form of all different kinds. Pyro reveals himself to them then the fattest man either one have them had ever seen comes also.
“SNIKT” Logan retracts his claws only to get knocked down by the belly of the fat man. Bobby summons his abilities to control moisture and turn it into ice and vanquishes the fire balls that are coming from him left and right. “John I just want Rogue I don’t want to fight you!” “You would want that wouldn’t you?! Want everything. Well guess what Bobby Rogues with us now and she doesn’t want you anymore? Your little perfect life isn’t so perfect after all is it?!” Wolverine gets up and puts his claws deep within the fat mans stomach only to get his hand stuck in the mans putty like physic. “Get out of my way bub! We came for the girl.” “Sorry” the man says in an oafish voice “Nothing moves the Blob.” Wolverine rolls his eyes in discontent then gets knocked back by the Blobs gigantic hand.
Mystique come out of nowhere and yells “Stop this!” She then turns to a teenage looking boy with dark auburn hair and says “Stop them now!” He then begins to make the earth shake and they all fall down violently. “I don’t have time for this! You come to reclaim your friend because you wanted her back. Did either of you think to ask what she wanted?” All look at her in bewilderment then Rogue comes out of the shadows of night and you she her beautiful unique looking features, as well as her white striped hair, and her long gloves that she didn‘t leave the mansion without.
She approaches Bobby “You have to go now Bobby...” he interrupts “Not without you! We‘ve come to save you from this place.” “Bobby I’m staying here and don‘t need saving.” He looks deep within her eyes “Rogue…No… No. This isn‘t you this is the woman that possessed you.” “Bobby you know it’s me. I need to know who she is….Was… I need to know who I am now.” “But Rogue, I love you.” “I…I need you all to go now Bobby before…” “Before we change our minds about killing you two.“ Mystique says pointedly. Logan stares at Rogue in disbelief he says to himself “I’m sorry.” Rogue hears him and kisses her hand and puts it on his forehead. “Goodbye Logan.”. As they left Mystique blows a kiss at Logan he puts up the middle claw at her and she smiles in the way she does. Bobby and John stare each other down and then the old woman known as Destiny says calmly “Good luck X-Men, From what I have foreseen you going to need it.” They look at each other confused then head for the jet. They then head back to the mansion.
Dark Water Part 2: End of days
Scotts voice suddenly started echoing in her mind “Scott!” Jean then suddenly awakens to what felt like at dream to be greeted by Storm with concern in her eyes. Her platinum blond hair glistening in the dark moon night lit room. Ororo saw that her friend had been a startled when she woke so she said “Are you alright?” She replied with “Yes.” Storm being able to tell something is wrong says “Can I get you anything?” Jean replied with distance “Oh… I could use a glass of water actually if it‘s not to much of a burden.” “Alright. I’ll be back. Don’t go anywhere.” Storm says jokingly.
When Storm went to the kitchen she seen Kurt he was on the counter as usual “I thought I told you not to sit there anymore.” “Then I am truly sorry my (says something in another language)” “What does that mean?” “My princess in German” “Really is that what you get out of that book?” she says looking down at the bible in his hands “You can find much relevance with the bible to everyday life.” “Like what?” “Like did you know they call this the end of times in the scriptures with so much evil arising In the world I can’t blame them.” “Really well get off the table or this will be your end.” she says joking.” he teleports to the ground. “Oh, who took the jet out? Well whoever did they are landing in.” says Kurt as Storm leaves to take Jean her glass of water.
When Storm returns she finds no one only a puff of smoke on Jeans bead she looks around and see that a window has been opened and sees a figure in the distance flying away. She calls out “Jean!” with no response. Then races to The Professors room thinking “The end of days indeed.”
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 25, 2006 17:19:19 GMT -5
The Upper East Side
“Jason did it work?” Says a man in eighteenth century clothing he approaches Jason while Jason sat in a chair at a table with his eyes closed looking like he was trying to concentrate and says “Well?!” Jason opens his eye and says “Yes Shaw!” In a delighted voice “thanks to my powers to create allusion I have penetrated the one known as Phoenix’s mind! She has such a dark side, a strength I have never encountered while making I used my powers of suggested. It was exhilarating!” He said looking like he had just felt the most pleasure he had ever felt.
“The Hellfire Club isn’t for you to get off on powerful minds Wyngard!” Emma erupts “Since when isn‘t it for me to get off?“ “Did you hypnotize the harlot or not?” “Emma so young and so bitter. So horny…” He says as he takes her leg puts it in a straddling positioning then starts messaging it with his palm and puts his pelvis close to hers. She breathes in heavily and exhales “As I thought you not that big.” she says in her catty and vindictive language that only he could understand he pushes her away and “Well I haven’t got complete control something is stoping me from taking complete control.” “Well I suggest that you find a way.” Sabastian The Hellfire Clubs other members Harry Leland and Pierce come and agree with Sebastian Shaw’s assessment “Emma Where is she now?” Emma concentrates “Wow! How did she get across town so quickly? She is close by” Jason asks curiously “Where is she Emma?”
The Night Ash
Cyclops was at the bar of the nightclub he had ordered some drinks and something to eat Alley sat next to him in a weird position and said “So you gotta lady?” He looked a little surprised at what he was hearing and then replied with “Yes. We have been together almost all our lives. I feel like I have always known her, like we have always had a connection.” she looked amazed and said with equal amazement “Why?” He looks at her and clears his throat and says “When your in love you don’t pay attention to how long a relationship is. I love her as much as I did ten years ago when we first started going out.” “You know everyone needs to let go at some point.” “What do you mean?”
Dazzler moved in like a lion moving in on it’s pray they had had a couple of drinks and were probably drunk. She said moving closer and closer with every word “Is your (hick-up) wife here now?” she said very seductively he replied with a whimpering “No.” She then planted the biggest kiss that she could muster. In the room just arrived in her night close was none other than Jean Grey “Scott am I here looking for you?” She said to herself.
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Post by Gynxsta on Jun 26, 2006 18:42:05 GMT -5
Wow more! Will Bobby find solace in Kitty's arms? He should... Because Rogue's sooooooooo out of his league... He should just give up now. lmao
Anyway... Keep up the great work...
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jul 2, 2006 23:03:22 GMT -5
Jean then seen it her love in the middle of a kiss with a woman that he barely knew! She hears a familiar voice behind her saying “Look you see now. He doesn’t love you. He‘s moved on why shouldn‘t you?” She turns around to see Jason Wynyarde and at that moment Scott pushes Dazzler away screaming “What is your problem?!” “Alright, sorry, I just wanted to have some fun.(HICK-UP)” Dazzler says in a drunken daze. Scott then sees what looks to be Jean in the corner of the room talking to a man dressed oddly. That moment Jean says to Jason “You are right. Why shouldn’t I move on? But first.” She turns around Scott says confused “Jean?”
Darkness erupts in Jean like a flower bursting into bloom. The walls begin to crack, the floor parts, people run away in pandemonium as a mini earthquake destroys the club. Jean then turns her attention toward Alley, the drunken afraid looking mutant girl, Jean walks over to her Scott right next to Alley he says concerned “Jean what are you…Have you been here long?” He rephrases quickly. Jean did not answer instead she takes Alison by the arm and launches her across the room. Alley got up to find Jean right in front of her. Jeans eyes were ablaze with fire she plunges her arm into Alexandra Blaire’s stomach and summoned a fireball within her. Alley screeched in pain looking in the soulless looking eyes of her attacker as she slowly decodes into ash. Scott plops himself on the destroyed floor looking at her unable to make cognizant thought muttering to himself hardly breathing with each word “Jean…. W-What… D-Did… You…. Do?” she walks near the door way where Jason is not before turning to Cyclops and saying “No Scott. I wasn’t there long. She then kisses Jason tenderly and they walk out.
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Post by Gynxsta on Jul 9, 2006 20:28:01 GMT -5
See that's why you dont piss Jean off! lol Keep up the great work!
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shadowfire
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You're a guy bobby, your minds only on one thing
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Post by shadowfire on Jul 18, 2006 19:38:25 GMT -5
you are a very talented writer. never change girl! i love your ideas and the way your plot grows more addictive. i love it. got a question for you though, will you read my story "Shadowfire" and tell me what you think? i would like an expert's advice. Thanx for your time!
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jul 27, 2006 19:14:31 GMT -5
Finnally my newest chapter! Sorry it took so long to get up I Have no friends
Cyclops waits for the other X-Men after following Jean and her handsome stranger to an Upper East Side estate that rivaled the mansion in grandness. The X-Men arrive there and park the Black bird on top of a nearby building and the first person to speak is Storm “Thank the goddess ,Ashanti, you found her.” “Yeah… Don’t be so sure…She isn’t herself… I just want to get her back home…” “Scottie what’s up? You have hurt voice.” Wolverine says concerned as much he could about Cyclopes “No-nothing I just need her back she seemed as if she where brainwashed…….” Brushing off his question “Storm. Where’s the Professor?” “He stayed home. He seemed distant.” ”What do you mean?” Beast asks “I do not know there was a distance in his words as if he felt guilty or sad.” “We don’t have time to investigate.” said Iceman “We gonna sit and talk all day or get in there and save Jeanie?” Wolverine interjects while “SNIKT.” His claws retract “Yes we must find Jean, I can teleport in there no?” Nightcrawler says “Yes but no, we need to get in there without causing a scene and you might create one by just teleporting.” Cyclops looks around then up “Storm and Nightcrawler. The roof.” “What?” Iceman says befuddled. Storm knowing exactly what he means raises her arms saying “I will lead the way.” Wind begins pushing her upward as the currents of air left her she remember the first time she met her best friend, Jean Grey, ten years ago. Ten years earlier: Xavier's School for Gifted Youngsters 1407 Graymalkin Lane, Salem Center
A young Ororo Munroe and Jean Grey are in a room Ororo in a nearby bathroom located inside the room and Jean is directly outside it with a cup of coffee in her hand she walks up to the door and knocks on it while saying “Ororo. I hope you like it here. I was beginning to get lonely being the only X-Woman and all. Ororo are you done?” “Done with what” The African girl comes out “(KOFF KAGHF KOFF!!!) ” Jean almost spills her coffee while taking a sip but luckily her telekinetic abilities instinctually kick in as she sees the woman in front of her completely nude. “Ororo why didn’t you put on the clothes I had out for you?” “My powers allow me to live without the need of clothing.” Jean smiles to herself because she sees in this girls eyes that she is sincere “You still need clothes.” “Why? Are American women so ashamed of their bodies that they feel they must cover up with pressed cotton plants and skinned animals?” “You know. I think we’re going to be friends.” she says smiling “I have no friends!” Jean says overtop of Storm with an energy fire ball “Jean…..No… Please?…We are here to save you…” “Save yourself.” she says with evil in her heart. She can not see the X-Men she sees 6 pirates and their slave girl. There is a war zone behind them X-Men versus The Hellfire Club Wolverine takes on a fat and snooty looking man “I am Henry Leland how do you do?” “Do yourself.” Wolverine jumps up claws out only to land on the ground with a big thud he wallows on the floor in pain. “What are you doin to me?” “I-that’s my mutant power I can control the density of objects.” Harry says as his hand is extended. Logan screams out one last time thinking of Jean and is somehow able to persevere through the vitality holding him down. He begins to overpower Harry’s powers looking very confused Harry puts his hand out more and then Wolverine falls through eleven stories to the basement’s sewer unconscious. Cyclops hits Jason Wyngarde hard with an optic blast then all the X-Men get knocked out by an unknown force.
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Post by Gynxsta on Jul 31, 2006 10:18:15 GMT -5
Wooo another great chappie! I love that interlude you had with Jean and Ro' and I cant wait to see what happens next... Keep up the good work!
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Aug 3, 2006 2:13:23 GMT -5
Billing for X3 X-Men 3 Rise of Darkness Patrick Stewart as Proffessor Xavier Famke Janssen as Phoenix James Marsden as Cyclops Hugh Jackman as Wolverine Halle Berry as Storm Anna Paquin as Rogue Shawn Ashmore as Iceman Kelsey Grammer as Beast Allan Cumming as Nightcrawler Rebecca Romijn as Mystique Sarah Michelle Gellar as Emma Frost(Buffy the Vampire Slayer) Julian McCohan as Jason Wyngarde(Nip/Tuck Charmed) Jim Caviesel as Sabastian Shaw(Angel Eyes) Gwen Stefani as Dazzler Timothy Spall as Harry Leland ( A series of unfortunate events Mr. Poe) Daniel Cudmore as Colossus Niel Jackson as Pierce(Blade the series "Marcus") Marissa Tomei as Sergent Lilandra (Rescue Me)
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Aug 12, 2006 23:37:44 GMT -5
The first X-Man to awake was Colossus who looked around and saw he was all of his friends and fellow X-Men shackled with reinforced adamantium chains he struggles to break free but it is to much and he can’t use his metal form for some reason. “Pierce go in the room and see if our guest have awoken yet?” Jason says to Sebastian’s dismay “You don’t give the orders around here Jason. I do.” “Yes of course.“ he says with his hand out in a respectful way “Pierce go in there and see if their awake yet.“ He says looking around not knowing what else to say a little embarrassed. Then Pierce says ,a blond and well built man with the superhuman strength and regenerative powers not quit as fast a Wolverines. (Not nearly as fast taking hours to regenerate sometimes) “My arm is hurt why don’t one of you go and do it?” He says holding his pet arm which got cut off by Wolverine in the midst of battle “Yes because you aren’t used to you arm being amputated daily. Maybe you should be a little more careful?” Emma says sarcastically Harry Leland gets up “I-I’ll go. Never send a boy to do a mans work. The lad isn’t even fit to be one of us how about the woman he wanted to recruit I- The Dazzler…Hogwash!” “Sit down old man. I will go.” Pierce says heated “I call if I see any MTV Pop Stars on TV.” Harry says rolling his eyes at Pierce as he walks away. Peter sees the Hellfire Club are beginning approach so he put his head down with the other X-Men While Pierce is gone
Emma take her chance and says “You all know we can‘t deceive and control The Phoenix’s mind forever someday she will see the truth and turn against the Inner Circle.” Jason says candid “Emma you worry to much you saw how easy it was to get her here. Something inside her yearns for new sensations a part that has been bottled up just waiting to be released. She wants more.” Emma looks at him with an evil face “I just don’t think that you should rush into anything is all.” Emma says uncomfortably “Is this because we dubbed her our new queen Emma?” “Me. Jealous. Wyngarde I thought you new me.” “Yes I do.” Jason says snidely Emma then tries to reclaim the kiss she almost had from Jason. She puts his hand on her exposed thigh and tries to brush her lips against his he pushes away when he sees Sebastian looking at Jean with lust in his eyes. “Their still asleep.” Peirce says to himself barely looking in the room and walks away.
Two hours later…
The rest of the X-Men awake Colossus tells them to stay quit Cyclops can’t “Where is she! Answer me~!” The Hellfire Club come into the room Colossus instantly tries to break free harder her says to Storm “Can you blast it?” Storm says “No. I can’t feel the elements pull my powers have been dampened by some strange force.” “That would be thanks to her.” Jason says walking into the room with a woman on his arm it was Jean! She looked a long time at Jason as if she where fawning over him. Cyclops screams to her “Jean!” She ignores him. Sabastion says his eyes still meeting Jeans “Emma will you take the lady out of these rags and put her in something more appropriate. After all she is saying goodbye to old friends.” She looks jealously at them “Sure. Come with me my lady” as she leaves she mutters to herself “ASSHOLES.” To be continued... Do you want more? Tell me~!!!
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