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Post by heraldofgalactus on Apr 26, 2006 2:01:37 GMT -5
Pretty clever, Nightside. I'm sure Raven is blushing right now for being the main star of your fantastical tale. You should consider writing children's book or start your own comic book or something. ;D
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Post by oldfriend on Apr 26, 2006 7:21:32 GMT -5
Nightside, awesome stuff! Looks like Raven has become a mutant! ;D
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Post by kennya on Apr 26, 2006 8:26:30 GMT -5
Awesome stories!! I like them!!! ;D
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Post by oldfriend on Apr 26, 2006 11:42:51 GMT -5
thanks kennya, do you think you might like to try one out?
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Post by kennya on Apr 26, 2006 12:37:05 GMT -5
thanks kennya, do you think you might like to try one out? Ok, oldfriend. This one is for you. Starring oldfriend; Title: The true hero. Oldfriend was sitting at his computer, being a true fan of the x men, when he heard loud noises out side his door. "Whats that?" he asked his self. He went to the door and open it. He saw cars flying and floating in the air. Oldfriend, then, realised that he was watching the fight between the mutants. " Go, Magneto, go!!!," he cheered. As he watched on he saw that the fight was pretty dangous. And he felt bad for the other side. He felt so bad he knew that something had to be done. So, oldfriend got between the two fighting sides. " Stop!!! Stop fighting!!" he yelled. Everyone stoped in thier tracts. " It's not right. Everyones tired. I got and idea. Let's go in and have something to eat, like pizza, icecream, and soda," oldfriend said. They all agreed to do so. When everyone went inside, Magneto pat oldfriend on the back, " You are a true hero my boy. I was starven." oldfriend beemed, " So was I." THE END!!!!! ;D I know it's long, But I didn't no what elese to write.
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Post by oldfriend on Apr 26, 2006 12:53:08 GMT -5
great stuff lol, glad you could join in. ;D
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Post by Nightside on Apr 26, 2006 19:48:28 GMT -5
Thanks heraldofgalactus and oldfriend. Kennya, I liked the funny ending, everyone got along and ate pizza and ice cream.
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Post by Raven on Apr 26, 2006 20:35:53 GMT -5
Title: Running the Bases Starring: Raven It was a normal day for Raven. She was walking down the street until.... "Look out" cried someone from above. Raven looked up to see glowing toxic waste falling toward her. It drenched her entire body. She started feeling funny so she ran home and slept. She woke up the next morning hoping that she received some kind of power like spider-man did, but instead she had headache and upset stomach. The worst thing was that today was Saturday, the day of her championship softball game. To make matters even worse was that she overslept and the game started in 1 hour. After getting dressed, she arrived at the field 10 minutes early. She headed toward her team in the locker room. "Why do you look so pale?" asked one of her teammates "I don't feel so good, I have an upset stomach and a headache" she replied. "Will you be able play, there is a famous baseball manager looking for talent, this could be your chance to hit it big" said another player "I'll try" said Raven The game started and it was Raven's turn to bat. She was in a state of stress. Raven was afraid that she would pass out, but once she got to the plate, she miraculously felt better. She also felt strong. The ball came and she hit a home run. She was shocked because that was her first one. Her teammates told her to run, and she did. As Raven ran, she felt that she was invincible. After she finished running the bases, her coach came up to her and told her that she was literally a blur and that he couldn't see her. She realized that it must have been the toxic waste. Apparently, the toxic waste did give her abilities. Raven had super strength and super speed. The manager that was watching the game told her that she was amazing and he would like her to work for him. Raven said yes and was overjoyed. From then on, every hit was a home run and she ran from base to base in less than a second. She announced in interviews that she had powers and people accepted her. She wound up being the best softball player in history. Nightside!!!! That was incredibly nice of you!!! Fantastic story And yes Mtbryan, I am blushing! LOL! ;D Your story is similar to an essay I wrote for my British Literature class! Lol! I'd show it to you, but it is very long...I'd probably take up the entire thread. Lol!
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Post by oldfriend on Apr 27, 2006 0:01:23 GMT -5
Raven, you should give it a try!!! ;D
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Post by kennya on Apr 27, 2006 7:26:53 GMT -5
It was fun!!
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Post by Raven on Apr 27, 2006 17:59:59 GMT -5
Raven, you should give it a try!!! ;D LOL! I don't want you all to start crying and saying, "Please no more!" LOL!
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Post by oldfriend on Apr 27, 2006 18:09:59 GMT -5
I don't think that'll happen!
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Post by Raven on Apr 27, 2006 18:12:57 GMT -5
I don't think that'll happen! Lol! You all are too nice to say that I'll think about it...
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Post by Downhere on Apr 27, 2006 20:34:30 GMT -5
I think you need to write a story Raven...I'm sure everyone will love it.
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Post by Nightside on Apr 27, 2006 20:42:39 GMT -5
I agree, you should write one Raven, if you want to.
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Post by Raven on Apr 27, 2006 20:49:37 GMT -5
So much peer pressure...I'm not sure how much more I can handle! LOL!...But, I suppose I'll try to think of a story... ;D
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Post by Nightside on Apr 27, 2006 20:52:56 GMT -5
Lol, sorry Raven, only if you want to write one.
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Post by Raven on Apr 27, 2006 21:08:44 GMT -5
Lol, sorry Raven, only if you want to write one. Don't apologize, I was just being sarcastic. But I'll write one...as soon as I think of a plot. lol. ;D I haven't forgotten, I just can't think of anything to write about...
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Post by Rogue24 on Apr 29, 2006 23:03:55 GMT -5
Those are great ones guys! I guess I'll shift from dragons for the moment and do something else..... Title: The Land Beyond.... Starring: Jubilee (the forum member....duh!) lol *NOTE* Do NOT look at the picture below until you have completed the story. Thank YouMy story begins at this forum. To be more precise, my story begins on Jubilee's computer while she is typing in her location for this forum. Of course nobody would normally take it seriously, so should she dare type in her correct location? Yes she would......... Jubilee typed in her location.... "A Galaxy Far, Far Away...." and pressed enter. Little would anyone realize that it WAS where she lived! Or at least...one of the places... We all know know Jubilee as a mere mortal, like most of the rest of us. But truly she is a goddess of the land, Ismandere....... When Jubilee finished with her profile for the forum, she decided that she was weary with mortal life for the moment and used her magic to create a portal to Ismandere. When she arrived, her appearence changed instantly! Her hair went white as snow, and blew in the wind. She grew taller, and had flowers as a crown. Her clothes changed to the white silk that only an Ismandere goddess was worthy of. Describing her is near impossible. All I can say is that she was perfection. Jubilee then sang a song so beautifully that it is beyond words. It was..... sad, but with traces of hope and love. Passion was weaved into the song like it was a spell of romance. The song was of despair and freedom, like the wings of eagles. When the song was finshed, a unicorn emerged from the mist. It was perfect, without flaw. And with it came the scent of fresh flowers falling in the springtime. Everything at once began to sing in harmony, with the coming of the unicorn. As for its appearace.... It was all white as freshly layed snow on the ground, exept for its eyes which were black, that equalled the dragon in inteligence. Its tail was long, and flowed in the wind. And its horn...... its horn was as bright as a thousand stars together. It was long and sharp, ready for anything, whether it was a battle or just for show. The unicorn looked peaceful but ready at anytime to defend her mistress. Jubilee mounted her and rode off into the mist of Ismandere......
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Post by oldfriend on Apr 29, 2006 23:08:30 GMT -5
Posting Partner, glad to finally be on at the same time once again! Awesome story!!!! Soooo descriptive and beautiful....seriously, you said in the past that you're not all that good....I disagree, you should seriously consider taking up writing as at least a hobby, if not more!!! KARMA FOR POSTING PARTNER!!! ;D I'm sure jubilee is going to love it!
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