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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Apr 30, 2006 21:35:02 GMT -5
This is the first chapter of my fanfic script I made after watching x2. I didn't think much about it until I saw the first chapter of the Official novelization. They are alote alike. I didn't want to post it because I didn't want anyone to compare but since they are similar I guess I will
Now with no further Ade my first chapter of my script: Starring: Patrick Stewart as Proffessor Xavier Famke Janssen as Phoenix James Marsden as Cyclops Hugh Jackman as Wolverine Halle Berry as Storm Anna Paquin as Rogue Shawn Ashmore as Iceman Kelsey Grammer as Beast Allan Cumming as Nightcrawler Rebecca Romijn as Mystique Sarah Michelle Gellar as Emma Frost(Buffy the Vampire Slayer) Julian McCohan as Jason Wyngarde(Nip/Tuck Charmed) Jim Caviesel as Sabastian Shaw(Angel Eyes) Gwen Stefani as Dazzler Timothy Spall as Harry Leland ( A series of unfortunate events "Mr. Poe") Daniel Cudmore as Colossus Niel Jackson as Pierce(Blade the series "Marcus") Marissa Tomei as Sergent Lilandra (Rescue Me)
A little red head girl and her best friend (she with blond) were playing with a ball bouncing it from one side to another. The red head threw it just a little to far knocking it into a nearby road the blond went to pick the ball and suddenly a car came screeching around the corner and hi the girl. She landed on the the ground with a big thud her friend raced to her bloodied body screaming out her name and then for help she plopped down to her knees screeching for anyone who could hear her. She then took her dieing friends hand and within that second she whipped her head back and within her eyes arose flames suddenly she could hear her friend she was screaming but she could never see her lips move so there she sat hearing the last thoughts of her best friend until the police arrive.
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 5, 2006 13:42:41 GMT -5
I will do it page by page by request.
X3/X-Men 3 Rise of Darkness
Chapter 1 Sleeping with a ghost
Scott Summers also known as Cyclops leader of the X-Men was asleep in his room dreaming. Or was he? In his dream he saw his presumed dead fiancé levitating over the shallow waters of Alkali Lake. Her lifeless body floating over the lake almost as if she were Jesus dying on the cross. She looked cold and wet crows flew over as if they where to feast on her dead looking flesh. Like a flash she snapped her head and opened her eyes to reveal flames. The crows burst into flames instantly.
Cyclops shot up feeling worse than ever he looked around as if he where to have seen her screaming “Jean where are you!” This was just one of a series of dreams he has had since Jeans supposed demise. For every one of them he feels more and more like she may be alive. Though the Professor reassures him that he can’t find any trases of her anywhere but he still somehow feels she’s alive.
TO BE CONTINUED....
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Post by wolfgang8565 on Jun 6, 2006 13:30:34 GMT -5
wow very similar to the movie....very
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 6, 2006 13:57:06 GMT -5
Thanks for replying Wolfie I'll have my second Chapter up soon. So stay tuned.
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 6, 2006 15:03:01 GMT -5
Next installment of my fanfic hope you like it Chapter 2 Where are they Now?
The X-Men and Brotherhood two duel mutant( People born with strange and wondrous powers) associations with each having different oppositions to the treatment of the human population who discriminate them as many have done to minorities and some have gone as far as to try extermination. Professor Charles Xavier, also know as Prof. X, the Headmaster of The School for the gifted Youngsters and mentor of the X-Men preaches tolerance and Erik Magnus Lenshur, his preferred name Magneto, of The Brotherhood of Mutants pefurs survival of the fittest.
After Jeans “death” their have been many changes in the X-Men Scott Summers is finally going out after a push from The Prof. X to leave the mansion and start having some fun. He did as the Professor asked as usual and met a young woman named Alison Blair. She is an aspiring songstress that preformed at the club that Scott went to with the mutant ability to turn sound into either soft sparkles of light to enhance a performance or powerful bolt of it to fend of attackers as Scott noted when she was ambushed while performing. She was attacked by The Hellfire Clubs lackeys. They are a group of of mutants that wear 1800’s attire and try to get powerful mutants to join their organization. He was asked after saving her with his power of cohesive force eye blasts to help her and come back the following week to protect her he apprehensively accepted only to get her involved in the X-Men.
Ororo Monroe Storm second in command of the X-Men is having trouble with her claustrophobia. When she was a child her parents died in a bomb explosion the concrete wall that laid atop of her bloody head prevented her from saving her parents ever since then she has had trouble with being in enclosed spaces. I a 3d simulation in The Danger Room (training facility of the X-Men) the walls caved in on Storm and with each inch it boxed her in flashes of her parents death ringed within her she closed her eyes tightly and when she opened them she was flying above the industrial room the entire room destroyed by her weather manipulating powers. Lighting plunging down with mock force she was pure and beautiful like the true goddess that she was proclaimed at her village before she became an X-Men. After that incident Storm feels she has finally overcame her fear and is more of a leader and a strange and wondrous regal quality that her teammates had never saw.
Bobby drake or Iceman’s Powers are evolving with each new training session in the Danger Room. Marie or Rogue Bobby’s girlfriend is slowly going insane! The Brotherhood attacked the mansion with a secret weapon she was strong, fast, beautiful and could fly she kicked the X-Men’s asses then took Logan or Wolverine by the neck and strangled him he was about to die until Rogue came she took her glove off laid it on the woman’s neck and started absorbing her powers. But something happened instead of only taking them for a short time she took them permanently. She is now seeking help from the Professor to deal with another memories, personality, and powers. Wolverine left the mansion feeling it his fault that Rogue was in this position. Finding a ticket hidden in his jacket one way to Tokyo, Japan Logan goes there to learn more about his hazy past. What he found was the woman who tried to kill him a year prior was his wife! Her name… Yoiko Oyama but he killed her. Or did he?
A man named Henry “Hank” McCoy or The Beast (as the children used to call him because of his big stature and overly large hands and feat with superhuman strength) came back to the place he lived and worked only five years prior his assistant Jean Grey where the best of friends. He was a scientist ,doctor, and X-Man at the School for the Gifted. He left because of the fear he was turning into a monster! He didn’t want anyone to see. He kept “The Beast” at bay with a special serum that counteracted his secondary mutation but stopped working now he has Blue fur draped over his entire body and blue skin to boot.
The newest members Kurt Wagner and Peter Rasputin otherwise known as Nightcrawler and Colossus are learning the do’s and don’t of being an X-Man.
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 6, 2006 22:19:51 GMT -5
Magneto has been stricken with a strange virus as result The Brotherhood reorganized under the leadership of Mystique who after what happened to Rogue felt sorry and has kept a low profile as consequence. Magneto was a father figure to her so she takes the leadership role very seriously. Pyro still has a moderate crush on his high school flame Rogue so when she went crazy he took it extremely hard. In The Upper East Side of New York a beautiful bleached blond haired woman looks outside a posh mansion’s window. Suddenly she gets knocked out by screams of fury coursing through her mind. her telepathic abilities have never felt such pain, such anguish. She screams then a man races in and says very snobby “Emma this better not just be you, trying to get attention.” Emma says ignoring the his comment one the floor “She’s coming..” in a very pointed scary tone that Jason Wyngard had never heard her voice contort. Emma gets up and says with a sinister smile “ The most powerful thing alive is about to rise.” “Emma What are you talking about?” Emma replies not paying attention to him “The rise of darkness is near. Get the rest of the Hellfire Club they will want to know about what I have found out.” TO BE CONTINUED... Someone tell me if you like it please.
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Post by Gynxsta on Jun 9, 2006 10:54:35 GMT -5
OMFG! MORE... GIMME MORE! lol Seriously, that *points* is just brilliant! Insane Rogue Rules! lmao Keep up the good work!
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 9, 2006 19:42:59 GMT -5
You like Rogue so far wait until you here what's next???
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 9, 2006 19:45:38 GMT -5
Chapter 3 X-Men Un-united
“Cyclops!” Storm yells “We can’t just leave in the middle of the night for some wild goose chase!” “ Look, I know it sounds crazy but she’s alive please believe me!” Then within that second Rogue walked in the War Room staggering her eyes in a daze she said in a mean spirited southern voice “She is gone! Get it through yur head!” Iceman looks at everyone else very hurt all understand even Cyclops to a degree then ventures to her and says in a strangely cheerful voice “What are you doing out of bed?” She ignores him and looks at Cyclopes with disgust. Scott replied to the look with “Fine if you wont help me I’ll go myself.” As if on cue Logan came in from Japan and says very heroically “When I first came here Jean was the only one of you I could get. We got to check it out. What if he’s telling the truth?” “What if he’s lying?” Bobby said pointedly “Well we wont know until we check it out then will we?” Scott has the final word “So who’s with me?
She’ Baaaack
Pretty soon everyone was in the X-Jet/Blackbird. All except Rogue who Bobby tucked in and kissed on the cheek and told her she needed some rest. The X-Men raced to the eerie waters of Alckoli lake to find their lost team member. Searching,… Searching ….Searching in tired desperation with no luck for any traces of a body being washed to shore. Finally after five hours of thoroughly examining the bank Bobby asks “Can we go home yet I have to check on…” but he could finish. They all watched in amazement to the figure in front of them…. It was Jean Grey! Naked with a swirl of magnificent fire around her in the shape of a bird. The entire lake was parted as if it was to perceived a goddess had arrived. She declared the name “Phoenix” Then fell down the water draped down with her like a curtain of flowing liquid she then returned to the waters she had only just moments ago arose from. Cyclops and Wolverine ran to the exit instinctively their heart was beating a million times a minute they hit a button and the step ladder declined they went to the end and dove in the lake for Jean. Colossus, Nightcrawler, and Iceman stayed to help Storm power the aircraft. Cyclops and Wolverine both look around Searching,… Searching… Yet again they couldn’t find any traces of her. Then suddenly Scott saw her floating on water currents as if she were a bird trapped in a watery tomb… He thought “Am I dreaming?”
He flung his eyelids together to make sure it was real, and then he pulled her close to his heart and his prayers where answered. He had found his love, his life, pawing his way through the liquid terrain he shouted at Wolverine ”I found her!” struggling to keep his head and hers afloat. Logan looked as if his eyes where about to pop out of their sockets they both looked at her with a level of disbelief Scott put his leather Jacket atop of her bare chest. As they struggled to move toward the X-Jet. Storm says authoritatively “Kurt!” Nightcrawler teleports down to them then back to the jet they then swerve of with great speed back home, to the School for the gifted.
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Post by Gynxsta on Jun 11, 2006 1:10:47 GMT -5
Wooo another GREAT chapter... And things are getting REALLY interesting! Gah, Keep up the good work!
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 11, 2006 12:26:08 GMT -5
Thanks My next chapter is long but it should be up soon.
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 11, 2006 14:23:22 GMT -5
She’s not mad She’s pissed!
Rogue was in her room brushing her hair in front of her mirror when she seen it, what she dreaded more than anything… The face of the woman she murdered staring at her. She just looked into her eyes Rogue tried to look away but her victims eyes stared into her soul and grabbed her in a way nothing else could. She was engulfed in the words that the woman said ”You stole my life! I will take yours.” Rogue leaned back in an attempt to over through the trance she had been put in. She fell from her seat and screams.
Booby came in at that moment and catches her from falling completely. Like a flash Rogue forgets all and says “Thank you Bobby. How did I get here?” “Jean she’s back, we found her, and she’s alive.” Bobby says in a frightened way because in gazing in her eyes they were blue/gray (The eye color of the woman Rogue killed). She says in response to his sacredness “She is! I wanna to see her!” “ No Rogue you both need your rest.” A little angry Rogue responds “ Fine Bobby just leave me cooped up in here forever!” “You need your rest Rogue something is happening something bad. I can feel it in the air.” “Bobby I’m sorry I just have been tired of being here.” Bobby tucks her in again careful not to touch her skin and says “I know. Has the Professor started your telepathic therapy yet” “No he hasn’t even came in once.” Hiding his frustration he says “Good night.” and turns off the light. Under his breath he mutters “ Cyclops and Wolverine got their girl back, when will I get mine?”
When Scott came in the room he saw his love, the one person he would give up his life for. He turn to see Beast looking at her from the medical bay “Hank have I told you how nice it is to have you back?“ “No.” Beast says jokingly “Good.” Cyclops sasses right back Hank says informatively “She was sleeping not that I could blame her she had gone through so much and still manages to look strong through it all. All leave you two alone.” “Beast, again, thank you.“ “It is my pleasure Scott. I loved her like family she was the one person that could ever give me a run for my money in physics and chemistry. When she died… Or at least when I thought she was deceased… It tore me apart…” Hank disengages then changes the subject “Aren’t you supposed to go to the club tonight?” “I am not going.” “Scott this woman’s life is in danger?” “I know can you do it?” “Scott I don’t know what she looks like or anything. Besides I have work. I am sure Jean will understand more than anyone… The mission comes first. ” “Bye Hank” “Goodbye Scott”
Hank leaves and at the exact moment Jeans eyes begin to open and Scott stared at them. He could get lost in them. He kisses her tenderly on the forehead and says very mild mannered his eyes still meeting hers“ Hi, how do you feel?” “Fine.” she said sweetly. He asked scared a little what she might think “There is this mutant. Her name is Alison she is in need of my help I have to go to stop her from being hurt by some bad people.” Jean lashed out in the most evil spirited voice Scott had ever heard come from her in all the years he had known her ”So you would rather be with that ***** than with me?!!” Scott looked bewildered. ”If you don’t want me to go then I won’t.” “NO, BE WITH YOUR *****!!!” He left her bedside deffinatly shaken driving toward Prof. X’s room.
“Scott she’ll be fine by morning.” “Professor are you sure?” “Yes everything is fine” he says brushing his comment aside. Then comfortingly says “It is our duty to help mutants in trouble Scott you of all people know that.” “Fine I’ll go.
Wolverine is dreaming. In his dream he feels the tender lips of Jean on his, her hand caressing his head as passion ensues… He wakes in a cold sweat he feels all of the love in his heart for one person. He doesn’t understand how this is right. He knows Jean loves Scott but if it ever didn’t work out she knows he is
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Post by Gynxsta on Jun 13, 2006 8:07:03 GMT -5
Woooo and the plot thickens! Tsk tsk, Logan, Logan, Logan... Will ya just get over her already... lmao Please dont make him all sappy like he was in X3... PLEASE. lol
Anyway keep up the great work!
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 13, 2006 10:59:55 GMT -5
Yeah deffinatly not that sappy. lol
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 13, 2006 15:14:52 GMT -5
“Hello Logan” a voice says in the doorway “Jean?” Wolverine says turning around from the left end of his bed to see her. His bare chest was moving up and down profusely with blood pounding he approaches her “What are you doing out of the med lab?” “What Logan, are you not happy to see me?” “No of course I like to see…” Jean grabs hold of Logan’s head and begins to kiss him in an animalistic manner “Jean wait stop!” He pulls her off of him “You told me you love Scott.” In a malevolent voice Jean says “So Logan… you know how it goes, I fool around with you and make love to Scott.” She lets out a hackle that startles Wolverine then says “That is how it is Logan! You want me here I am! Is it not how you imagined it?! TELL ME!” Jean then tries to restart the entire ordeal of kissing. “No! Jean I don’t want you, not like this.” She moves back her eyes grow wide then telekinetically Jean pulls Logan’s sweat pants down “I do.” Her voice echoes. Logan pulls them up and approaches her “Jean get out! Now!” Jeans eyes changed instantly from disgusted to disordered eyes. She not remembering anything says “Where’s am I…? Logan? Where’s Scott? I remember I was in the medical lab and… I don‘t remember what happened after?”
Storm enters the room looking confused “JEAN there you are! Scott would kill me if I lost you when I was supposed to be the one to be watching you until his return.” Jean looks confused “Jean can you go to your room for a minute? I need to speak with Logan for a moment.” Jean ventures toward her room in the subbasement. Wolverine tries to leave Storm pushes him back in “I never liked Jean flirting with you. But she is my friend so I accepted it because I trusted her. But now it’s different she is in a vulnerable state and Scott loves her! He really loves her. Even death didn’t keep him from loving her and never giving up hope that she was alive. They are my dearest friends when you mess with them you mess with me.” “I’m really scared.” Logan retorts sarcastically. White erupts in Ororo’s through the window lightning strikes down several times Storm replies to Wolverine “You should be.“ Logan ignoring her threat goes walks past her Storm's eyes transform back to normal and she says "Where I come from men treat their women like Queens! She will never love you like she does Scott!" Logan tries to ignore and while doing so he sees Colossus “Pete want to come with me, I need to work off a little…(Looks at Storm as she walks away) steam?”
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 13, 2006 20:23:07 GMT -5
My poster for X3 I just made
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 14, 2006 14:28:53 GMT -5
Danger room confessions/It’s My Fault!
Having a conversation almost as if they are not in the midst of hell. Guns ablazing in an industrious looking room Peter Rasputin had transformed into a magnificent organic metalloid substance Logan in his X-Uniform looks nonchalant about the entire ordeal. “Have you spoken her yet?!” Colossus asks with a deep Russian accent. Brushing his comment aside he says “ Fastball bub.” Colossus rolls his eyes then catapults him to the sealing where on the wall is an unbelievably gigantic machine guns he disarms all swiftly with an unmatched will he destroys the weapons easily jumping from one to the next and jumps down and looks at Peter with a raised eyebrow. “You all right comrade?” Colossus says almost apologetically.
“I am fine.” he says as he walks out of the door Peter follows and says as they change into their civilian garb “You feel guilty do you not?” “Pete I aint gonna sit here and discuss my feelings with you like a woman.” “But you do though don’t you?” Colossus says in a somber tone. ”Do what?” Logan says irritated Believe it is your fault for what happened to Rogue.” “If it weren’t for me she….She wouldn’t be the way she is. It’s is my fault I was of my game. I don’t want to talk about it anymore. He walks out of the room leaving Peter to ponder what he had just said.
Dazzle me!
When Scott walked into the night club he was the only guy that looked like him. You could compare it to a rose peddle in a glass of milk. Everyone was looking very rock and roll and him, with a tux. He looked around trying to find his date (but not really he was already in the hot seat with Jean) and then he heard it, it was the most beautifully sung song he had ever heard…. It was Allison ”Alley” Blaire/The Dazzler (which was her stage name) as he approached the stage he notices her blue make-up on her eyes in the shape of stars and brown leather jacket atop a white jump suit. She was beautiful with long straight blonde hair. He motions to her in a windshield wipers motion. She almost looks past him like she didn’t notice him but she still observed his presence.
And then, right in the middle of the performance The Inner Circles goons came busting through the crowd behind Dazzler on her circular platform. Alison fell right into Cyclops’ lap she then retorts “We’ve got to stop meeting like this.” He looks at her bemused then got up readying himself for action reaching for his visor in his pocket. Then he said “Don’t worry I’ll protect you!” he yells over the music in the back round. They lunged at them but then one said “Sebastian says she is no longer of importance. Lets go!” They then dissapear into a the crowd Cyclops wanders around trying to find one with no luck. He comes back to Alison and asks if she is alright she says yes “I sure showed them didn’t I?” Cyclops says jokingly. Then Alley turns to him carelessly and said “ Are you hungry I am starved?” “I’m sorry I have to get back to…” “They could come back. You don‘t want to leave defenseless ol‘ me to fend for myself would you?” she says with puppy dog eyes “You are anything but defenseless.” Cyclops says “Please?” “Fine I’ll stay for one drink.”
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Post by Gynxsta on Jun 14, 2006 15:02:32 GMT -5
Yeah!! Go storm, I was waiting for her to throw a lightning bolt at Logan in X3. lol
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 14, 2006 15:09:08 GMT -5
Hehehe^^^
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Jun 15, 2006 14:02:02 GMT -5
Dangerous Minds
“You stole my life I’ll take yours.” Rogue wakes up from a nightmare with those words spinning through her head. Breathing in and out she feels death. She remembers all the emotions, all the loves within her mind, and hate within the woman’s heart as she killed her. She could feel the woman’s essence being funneled into Rogues body so slowly yet so fast with memory of all she was and has ever been. Rogue new she was being fragmented as it happened, it always happens, when she touches another living thing her mind splits and some things stay stored and some replaced with the others memories most of them long term memories but some small things she would find herself recall and slip away into one of her victims minds. David, her first kiss, (and her last real kiss) he was the first to ever be exposed to her ability to drain life-force. She still could feel trace amounts of his mind intertwining with hers. But nothing was as strong as the mind that intertwined with her own now. This marvel of a woman breached into her soul more than any other could ever. She needed to know more….
Rogue grabbed her suitcase packed as much as she could and then ventures toward the front door Logan sees her and at first keeps a distant until she gets to the door. “Where yah going kid?” “I ain’t no kid.” she says disoriented. He looks at her sympathetically “You runnin again?” “No. I just have something to take care of.” “Rogue you are in no position to go anywhere common” Rogue eyes look around sadistically “No I have to. I have to…”Logan grabs her arm gently and begins to take her to her room “I have to!” She screams. Logan looks in bewilderment he then tries to restrain her she then whips around and her eyes turn that shade of Gray/blue. She knocks back Logan with great force and then slammed the double door open and flies of the campus.
To be continued
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