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Post by ladysylvia on Aug 4, 2006 11:04:49 GMT -5
Why is it that fans think they can do a better job in rewriting a story, than the actual screenwriter? Whenever the fans commence upon this endeavor, their version usually end up not being so hot. I don't think that X-MEN 3 needed a rewrite. I think that it needs to be spared from one.
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Post by Psylocke 4 ever on Aug 4, 2006 17:38:00 GMT -5
Why is it that fans think they can do a better job in rewriting a story, than the actual screenwriter? Whenever the fans commence upon this endeavor, their version usually end up not being so hot. I don't think that X-MEN 3 needed a rewrite. I think that it needs to be spared from one. excuse me 'human' wots wid da negativity. this is for us fans to express ourselves and wot we would have liked to happen instead of wot actually happened, thats why its da rewrite thread lol. and i guess u aint read my rewrite of da juggy and kitty scene mines much better than the film version so check it out and then make your comments. it shud be two pages back no more than 3 and is at da bottom of da page!!! |
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Post by perfectstormx on Aug 5, 2006 14:39:29 GMT -5
alright jarat, no need to be rude, but ladyslyvia, we just like to personalize our re-writes, it's just for fun, it's not neccessarily better than the writers, which i think did a wonderful job, but we like to have a little fun and make our own scenes, gives us a chance to be creative and have fun!  |
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Post by Psylocke 4 ever on Aug 5, 2006 18:10:41 GMT -5
i werent being rude i was just stating da obvious lol
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Post by perfectstormx on Aug 6, 2006 16:21:56 GMT -5
Shockwaves and Fun
[Part after Storm strikes Callisto through the door] Arclight gets up from a nearby Cherry bush from getting hit by Storm's lighting bolt. She quickly surveys the area. At once she leaps in action, clapping her hands together creating a massive shockwave which takes Storm of her feet and destroys the front of the house. Storm gets up off her feet and they look at each other. Storm rises to the air ready to strike again but she has underestimated the Brazilian war torn woman, another shockwave flies through the air and Storm falls onto the roof and into the bush.
By this time Storm has had enough, and before another Shockwave erupts, she gathers gale force winds the starts spinning towards Arclight and Storm grabs her hands. Then circulating the winds so Arclight goes flying straight through the front window of the house, plumeting into Callisto who regained strength and decided to go after her attacker. Callisto helps Arclight get up but by that time Storm comes spinning in with winds that blow the two woman in the house right into a sofa and another into a table.[This is when the battle inside house happens][/center] |
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Post by Psylocke 4 ever on Aug 6, 2006 18:40:12 GMT -5
its alrite, gud work
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Post by perfectstormx on Aug 7, 2006 20:08:41 GMT -5
goody, i will bring another one soon, when i come back from my holiday. |
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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Aug 8, 2006 22:10:51 GMT -5
That was really good. I have some suggestions though. Storm should spin on everything she does. We dont want her to throw up or anything lol. Maybe she could use the winds to lift her and take her to them.
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Post by Psylocke 4 ever on Aug 9, 2006 7:22:20 GMT -5
u do one p-gal lol
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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Aug 9, 2006 12:23:13 GMT -5
I did some funny ones some pages back, and i already helped someone write a story of Jean vs Storm I dont know what thread it was under though. Ill try to think of something, uhhh let me see.
All the good ones are taken. I dont want to do the sameone perfect storm did because ts just rude. Ill think of somethng and get back at you.
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Post by perfectstormx on Aug 13, 2006 10:22:37 GMT -5
i love charmed, love the avy girly.
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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Aug 13, 2006 11:21:37 GMT -5
Thanks.
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Aug 13, 2006 11:26:20 GMT -5
P-Gal I made a Charmed thread come drop by.
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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Aug 13, 2006 11:39:14 GMT -5
I just did.
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Post by ~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~ on Aug 13, 2006 11:41:14 GMT -5
Coolness!
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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Aug 13, 2006 11:44:43 GMT -5
Lol, im trying to make a new avatar. This stuff is hard lol. I dont make avatars often.
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Post by perfectstormx on Aug 13, 2006 11:46:13 GMT -5
what are you trying to make it out of? charmed? x-men?
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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Aug 13, 2006 11:48:41 GMT -5
Charmed.
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Post by Psylocke 4 ever on Aug 13, 2006 13:17:37 GMT -5
do me one 2 wid prue doe
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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Aug 13, 2006 13:22:38 GMT -5
Ill try my best. Im just having a really hard time finding clips. If i do it frame by frame like I usualy do its going to take atleast a week. I mean ive got some clips but their kinda blurry. Ill try my best though.
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