Official X-3 Scenes: Fan Rewrites

[Weather Goddess]

Hello guys, I know I haven't been here in quite a bit, but I have to say
my views on the film have changed drastically after viewing it another 3
times lol. I still think there are some things that could have been done
better as far as the development of some character's and plot wise, so
I make this thread for all those who wish to take a scene from the film,
and redo it (in words of course) the way you'd envision on the big screen.

Now, with that ... here is my rewrite "Enter the Morlocks"... enjoy!

After Magneto finished addressing the assembled mutants within the abandoned church that now served as their conference hall, he descended down the steps leading up to the center stage of the holy house only to be followed by three curious yet indecisive women. One, Asian in appearance with streaks of purple color through out her trimmed raven locks & a small red scar upon her right eye was the first of the three to speak up, Psylocke she was called by her comrades.

“You talk pretty tough for a guy in a cape” Psylocke said sarcastically, causing Magneto to stop in his tracks.

Pyro, now completely steadfast in his loyalty to Magneto and his vision of mutant superiority immediately took offense to the woman’s jest and turned to ignite a ball of flame within his palm which was activated by a device strapped to each of his hands and worked much like his old Zippo lighter, painted with the exact same shark motif.

“Back off!” Pyro said in warning to the violet haired mutant who seemed unfazed by his power flaunting and in turn curled her hand into a clenched fist that began to glow with a bright pink energy that grew into what she’d referred to many times before as a “Psi Blade” a glowing weapon of different hues of pinks & purples that almost looked as it could be hot to the touch, made up of psychic & telekinetic energies.

Psylocke lifted her fist surrounded by the vibrant energy, keeping her elbow bent and shot Pyro a challenging glare. “After you!” she spat back. A faint smirk found it’s way onto Pyro’s lips in wake of the woman’s retort seeing as how she was just as fearless & feisty as he’d like to fancy himself.

The exchange however was interrupted as the second of the female mutants pushed her way between the opposing two to approach Magneto. She was dressed entirely in leather, with soft mocha skin, and black hair that was pulled back into a simple ponytail that cascaded over her left shoulder like a waterfall, while her chest and face were adorned with tattoos of a Greek symbol. She called herself Callisto.

“If you’re so proud of being a mutant, where’s your mark?” she asked questionably

Magneto kindly obliged her with an answer. “I have been marked once my dear” he says rolling back the sleeve of his black turtle neck, revealing a series of numbers that had been tattooed upon his fore-arm during his days of living in Nazi concentration camps.

“And let me assure you, no needle shall ever touch my skin again” he said finally.

Pryo, once again stepped in to defend his new mentor, directing his attention to the one who’d questioned Magneto’s loyalty to mutant kind.

“Do you know who you’re talking too?” Pyro asked, feeling that Magneto’s name should be one everyone mutant knew and revered.

Callisto gazed Pyro’s way for a brief moment to acknowledge his question then returned her focus back upon the grey haired man before her that carried himself with the poise of a King. “I know!” she began in direct mocking of Pyro’s inquiry. “That you have the ability to control magnetism and bend metal to your will. I know your feisty & eager companion here has the power to manipulate and control fire. And I also know there are 87 mutants in this very room and none of them above a class 3 …” she paused for the briefest moment and continued. “Except for you two.” She finishes, referring to Magneto & Pyro.

A smile formed upon Magneto’s face, this woman before him was a living cerebro, but to make sure his ears were not playing tricks upon him she asked her … “You can sense other mutants and their powers?” Callisto nodded. “That and more” she replied. Magneto had immediately become intrigued with the woman and desired to know more. “You have more talents?” he asked with curiosity in his tone. Seeing no need to speak when she could show, Callisto turned around and darted across the length of the room in what seemed like a blur only to return standing before Magneto just as quickly.

“That, coupled with acute senses, and if I do say so myself, superb hunting and tracking skills” she said with a cocky smirk.

Magneto thoroughly satisfied with Callisto then turned his attention upon the last of the three women. Tall & lanky she was, with a rather masculine, almost Amazon like façade. “And what is it you do?” Magneto asked, addressing the woman known as Arclight.

Callisto immediately intervened. “I don’t think you want to see a demonstration of her abilities, at least not here. That is of course unless you’d like this entire building to collapse and kill us all.”

“Shockwaves” said Arclight. “I create them” she folded her arms in front of herself and cocked her head to the side.

Magneto didn’t need any further evidence to see these women would greatly benefit his cause. “I humbly ask you join my brotherhood, to fight this cure and our oppressors!”

Callisto eagerly nodded in agreement “You’ve got yourself a deal”

“Excellent!” Magneto exclaimed, then tossed his cape behind him and made his way out of the building with Pyro by his side, the three female mutants not far behind. As they proceeded down the filled isles of the packed church, Callisto snapped her finger commandingly and dozens of Morlocks rose to their feet to follow their leader & Magneto into the battle that was soon to come.

Feedback much appreciated ;D

[xmenfan32]

hey, i really truly like it, especially that psylocke part. it would of been so cool if they would of done what you just said in the movie. it would of been frickin awesome. i really like how you went into detail and added more cool and unique stuff. i think it'd be cool if you did that to the whole movie and post it, i'd definitaly read it. keep up the good work.

[perfectstormx]

I LOVE IT!!! lol.... archlight talks!!!! omg, they should of done it like that! MORE!!! lol

[Lust]

I now she is cool i want her to get more comic time

[Weather Goddess]

YAY! feedback finally! LoL. Thanks guys, glad you likes that rewrite.
And I am back with another. This one is a scene that is not in the film
but most definitely should have been. I call this scene "Birth of the Phoenix"

“BIRTH OF THE PHOENIX”

It was a beautiful day with blue skies and not a cloud in sight, the birds chirped and the innocent laughter of children traveled gently on the summer breeze. Two young girls skipped & ran happily along the sidewalk, both no more than 10, maybe 11 years of age, throwing a pink Frisbee back and forth. One had flowing deep crimson locks, majestic green eyes, and a tall athletic figure with soft, elegant features that were evident she’d grow into a gorgeous woman when the time came. The other was just a few inches shorter with dark hair, brown eyes, and heavier set than her friend, but a beauty nonetheless.

The two walked the few blocks it took to get to their neighborhood playground, passing by the homes of the neighbors they knew all too well. The girls waved to Mr. Claremont as he mowed his lawn, and Mr. Lee who was watering his garden gave them a cheerful hello.

“Hello Jean, Hello Annie!” he said with a smile as they passed.

“Hey Mr. Lee” the girls replied simultaneously and continued about their way.

Finally the two reach their destination, but had to cross the street to get to the other side where the playground sat, ready for play. With Frisbee in hand, Jean decides to toss it the width of the road into the playgrounds vicinity and reactively, Annie goes after it.

“I got it!” Annie said aloud as she ran to catch the Frisbee.

As she did so, Jean noticed a vehicle speeding down the road and time itself seemed to slow down as she realized it was not stop stopping and was getting closer by the second. Jean screamed Annie’s name frantically, but by the time Annie herself realizes exactly why her friend was yelling, it is too late. The car struck Annie hard, knocking her aside, despite its effort to break to a stop.

Jean looked on in complete horror and was hit with a headache that felt as if she’d been hit by a wall of bricks. She fell to the ground, waling in excruciating pain, yet she was in no physical danger. The pain shot through her entire body, causing her back to arch in response, but soon the pain ended and there was nothing, just total darkness.

The driver, whom was drunk more than anyone had a right to be, came to a brief halt but in an effort to at least save his own ***, sped off and fled the scene. Jean arose and stood on the other side of the road too shocked to even let out the slightest of screams. “Did that just happen?” She thought to herself. “Am I dreaming?” however, Annie’s motionless form made it all too clear, this was no dream.

When realization sat back in, Jean snapped out of her frozen state and rushed to her friend’s side. Tears streamed down her cheeks as she looked down on Annie’s broken, bloody body and instantly fell to her knees to hold her close. A range of emotions filled Jean’s mind & heart; fear, sadness … anger, an anger that took hold and would not let go.
Jean’s teary eyes opened suddenly and were filled with an empty blackness, no longer the emerald green they were only moments before. Her hair flowed as if she was submerged within water, and soon she & Annie were surrounded by blazing fire that seemed to have manifested from within Jean herself, a fire that represented her sorrow, her inner rage!

Jean for that moment only wanted the one who did this atrocious act to pay, and pay he would. The drunk driver, who’d now been pulled over by the police for speeding and driving while intoxicated, was being handcuffed when his entire body and vehicle disintegrated into ashes right before the two police officers who were left standing confused & most of all, scared.

Jean had concentrated solely on her target and destroyed him, and within her mind’s eye she saw his death and smiled with a almost sadistic satisfaction in wake of her kill. The surrounding flames began to subside until they were no more and Jean returned to her normal state only to black out and fall gently beside her deceased friend, frantic approaching neighbors being the only thing she saw before passing out completely.

(My scene would continue to the scene where Xavier & Magneto come to visit Jean. Of course, this would be sometime after Annie’s death. A couple of months maybe.)

[perfectstormx]

OMG, MORE PERFECT can u please do one with storm and arclight, i don't know why i want arclight

[Weather Goddess]

^^ Sure! I plan on working on the Storm vs Callisto neighborhood battle
next, so make sure you come back to check that out soon. it's gonna rock!

[perfectstormx]

OMG, I LOVE U
this is like my favorite thread now!!! don't forget archlight1!!!

[Lust]

More More please this is alsome this crap rocks let get some more

[perfectstormx]

MORE!!! lol^^^ hehe... i can't wait for ur storm vs. callisto, and some more archlight!!! yay!!! this is the best thread ever!

[~DARK PhO€NIX D€STINY~]

I loved the birth of Phoenix!!!

[Lust]

Me to

[dr. kellogg]

i love these rewrites! please do more...i'd particularly like to read your version of rogue's return to the mansion and the phoenix's death.

[Weather Goddess]

Ok and I'm back. Happy to see the Phoenix Birth rewrite is liked! Yayness!

But as I said above, here is The Storm vs Callisto, Quill, & Arclight battle!
You'll notice some of the same things that happened in the movie, but I
also added things and put my own twist on the end of battle between
these these three. Storm kicks major butt in this one hehe. Storm fans!
this one is a must read for you guys! and all of you. Ok no more talking
from me, here you go. I call this rewrite "Rumble in the Streets" hehe.

“RUMBLE IN THE STREETS”

Something was going on inside the Grey house and Logan could most definitely sense it. Storm however tried to hold him back for a moment’s time, reminding him that Xavier wanted to handle this affair alone, but when things became clear that all was not well, Logan jumped into action and charged toward the massive mutant “Juggernaut” whom was blocking their way. Storm looked on and wasted no time as the other three mutants posted outside of the house began to make their move.

Storm summoned the winds to lift her body above the roof tops of the neighborhood, while the pedestrians scurried into their homes to get out of harms way. Her arms folded one over the other in front of her chest and she began to spin in a cyclonic action, calling forth even more powerful gusts of winds. On the ground the mutant known as Quill (for obvious reasons) extended the sharp spikes that were the reason for his namesake and launched several in Storm’s direction. His attempt failed. The piercing quills were blown aside by the surrounding winds once in Storm’s vicinity and into the side a nearby mailbox.

The first move had been made, now it was time to make one of her own. Storm began to descend from the sky, surrounded by a swirling tornado vortex and aimed her spinning body in the direction of her attackers. She unfolded her arms and stretched them wide as she approached the small gate surrounding the front lawn, but that was not enough to stop her from coming through.

Storm burst through the fence and Quill & Arclight foolishly approached only to be knocked completely off the property by swinging fists and streaks of lightning as Storm’s flesh made contact with theirs. The white haired goddess slowed and came to a halt in front of the front door where stood the Morlock leader Callisto, ready to fight.

Storm however would not give her the chance to attack and threw her hands out in front of her and ZAP! A bolt of lightning rained down from the sky and used Storm’s body as a rod, releasing itself through the tips of her fingers. Callisto was hit! And blasted directly through the door she was guarding. Storm charged after her, walking through the door way that no lover held a door at all, and looked down to Callisto who was just recovering from the blow.

Callisto brushed away the debris that covered her and in the blink of an eye darted across the room in front of the fireplace using her super human speed. This came as a surprise to Storm who was not expecting the sudden move, and Callisto took full advantage of the brief astonishment of her opponent. In a blur, Callisto ran toward Storm and sent a powerful uppercut smashing into her chin, a blow that weakened Storm’s footing and caused her to fall back, but Callisto sped behind her stumbling enemy and grabbed Storm by the hair. She ran forward, pushing Storm along with and proceeded to send her adversary’s forehead through a glass coffee table before them.

Callisto pulled hard on Storm’s hair that was clenched within her palm and lifted her up, pushing her hard into the nearby wall. Storm clenched & bared her teeth in anger while her eyes faded to blue, then total white. She clenched her fists that were now charged with an electric energy that circled her hands in a serpentine manner. Callisto charged and lunged forward with a kick that Storm evaded by twisting just left of the incoming boot. Callisto missed her target and did not get a second chance to attack before Storm sent her fist crashing into her chest with an electric burst that illuminated the entire room.

Callisto went flying backwards through the air upon impact, violently smashing through the living room window back out onto the front lawn with Storm on her tail, hastily exiting through the door way she’d blast Callisto through only moments before. As she did so she was blindsided by an attack she didn’t see coming. Storm was hit by a shock wave that knocked her off her feet and onto her back. When she lifted her head, Arclight stood on the opposite side of lawn ready to attack once more. Storm had to act fast if she was to dodge this one. She swiftly rose to her feet and took flight straight ahead. As Arclight prepared to deliver yet another shockwave by bringing either hand against one another in a clap, Storm grabbed her by both her wrists and flew into the air spinning in a cyclonic manner once more before loosening her grip and landing upon the pavement just in front of the house, allowing her opponent to fall were she may, which happened to be atop the roof of a parked vehicle in a neighboring drive way a few houses down.

Back on the lawn, Callisto had recovered and regained her footing and was now joined by Quill. Storm knew she would not be bale to take them on with Callisto’s speed & Quill’s discharging spikes in a hand to hand battle, so she used the only option that came to mind and conjured What the professor deemed “Electric Shock” a move that’d come in handy during prior missions when faced with numerous enemies. Suddenly an electric pulse radiated outwards from her body and electrocuted Callisto & Quill just enough to cause unconsciousness. It was over; at least her fight was, for Wolverine could still be heard inside battling it out with Juggernaut. Storm had to help him by any means necessary, but as she ran into the house gravity seemed to turn on its head and Storm levitated into the air and hit the ceiling.

((This of course is where Phoenix begins levitating the house and everything in it. Oh and the Storm moves used in the scene are from a few different places. The spinning move, which was in the film I think they derived from X-Men Legends 2 from a Storm move called “Whirlwind Armor” The lightning fists was a great adding taken from the novel and the electric pulse was taken from X-men Legends 2 as well. A move as I stated in the scene called “Electric Shock.))

More coming soon, hope you guys enjoyed this one too. But Sleepy time now!

EDIT:Come on guys feedback! feedback! I'm eager to know what you think
Don't just read, respond pretty please with suagr on top? lmao

[storm15]

there are many things i would re write but most of all more storm time more storm damit

[storm15]

weathergoddess said:

Ok and I'm back. Happy to see the Phoenix Birth rewrite is liked! Yayness!

But as I said above, here is The Storm vs Callisto, Quill, & Arclight battle!
You'll notice some of the same things that happened in the movie, but I
also added things and put my own twist on the end of battle between
these these three. Storm kicks major butt in this one hehe. Storm fans!
this one is a must read for you guys! and all of you. Ok no more talking
from me, here you go. I call this rewrite "Rumble in the Streets" hehe.

“RUMBLE IN THE STREETS”

Something was going on inside the Grey house and Logan could most definitely sense it. Storm however tried to hold him back for a moment’s time, reminding him that Xavier wanted to handle this affair alone, but when things became clear that all was not well, Logan jumped into action and charged toward the massive mutant “Juggernaut” whom was blocking their way. Storm looked on and wasted no time as the other three mutants posted outside of the house began to make their move.

Storm summoned the winds to lift her body above the roof tops of the neighborhood, while the pedestrians scurried into their homes to get out of harms way. Her arms folded one over the other in front of her chest and she began to spin in a cyclonic action, calling forth even more powerful gusts of winds. On the ground the mutant known as Quill (for obvious reasons) extended the sharp spikes that were the reason for his namesake and launched several in Storm’s direction. His attempt failed. The piercing quills were blown aside by the surrounding winds once in Storm’s vicinity and into the side a nearby mailbox.

The first move had been made, now it was time to make one of her own. Storm began to descend from the sky, surrounded by a swirling tornado vortex and aimed her spinning body in the direction of her attackers. She unfolded her arms and stretched them wide as she approached the small gate surrounding the front lawn, but that was not enough to stop her from coming through.

Storm burst through the fence and Quill & Arclight foolishly approached only to be knocked completely off the property by swinging fists and streaks of lightning as Storm’s flesh made contact with theirs. The white haired goddess slowed and came to a halt in front of the front door where stood the Morlock leader Callisto, ready to fight.

Storm however would not give her the chance to attack and threw her hands out in front of her and ZAP! A bolt of lightning rained down from the sky and used Storm’s body as a rod, releasing itself through the tips of her fingers. Callisto was hit! And blasted directly through the door she was guarding. Storm charged after her, walking through the door way that no lover held a door at all, and looked down to Callisto who was just recovering from the blow.

Callisto brushed away the debris that covered her and in the blink of an eye darted across the room in front of the fireplace using her super human speed. This came as a surprise to Storm who was not expecting the sudden move, and Callisto took full advantage of the brief astonishment of her opponent. In a blur, Callisto ran toward Storm and sent a powerful uppercut smashing into her chin, a blow that weakened Storm’s footing and caused her to fall back, but Callisto sped behind her stumbling enemy and grabbed Storm by the hair. She ran forward, pushing Storm along with and proceeded to send her adversary’s forehead through a glass coffee table before them.

Callisto pulled hard on Storm’s hair that was clenched within her palm and lifted her up, pushing her hard into the nearby wall. Storm clenched & bared her teeth in anger while her eyes faded to blue, then total white. She clenched her fists that were now charged with an electric energy that circled her hands in a serpentine manner. Callisto charged and lunged forward with a kick that Storm evaded by twisting just left of the incoming boot. Callisto missed her target and did not get a second chance to attack before Storm sent her fist crashing into her chest with an electric burst that illuminated the entire room.

Callisto went flying backwards through the air upon impact, violently smashing through the living room window back out onto the front lawn with Storm on her tail, hastily exiting through the door way she’d blast Callisto through only moments before. As she did so she was blindsided by an attack she didn’t see coming. Storm was hit by a shock wave that knocked her off her feet and onto her back. When she lifted her head, Arclight stood on the opposite side of lawn ready to attack once more. Storm had to act fast if she was to dodge this one. She swiftly rose to her feet and took flight straight ahead. As Arclight prepared to deliver yet another shockwave by bringing either hand against one another in a clap, Storm grabbed her by both her wrists and flew into the air spinning in a cyclonic manner once more before loosening her grip and landing upon the pavement just in front of the house, allowing her opponent to fall were she may, which happened to be atop the roof of a parked vehicle in a neighboring drive way a few houses down.

Back on the lawn, Callisto had recovered and regained her footing and was now joined by Quill. Storm knew she would not be bale to take them on with Callisto’s speed & Quill’s discharging spikes in a hand to hand battle, so she used the only option that came to mind and conjured What the professor deemed “Electric Shock” a move that’d come in handy during prior missions when faced with numerous enemies. Suddenly an electric pulse radiated outwards from her body and electrocuted Callisto & Quill just enough to cause unconsciousness. It was over; at least her fight was, for Wolverine could still be heard inside battling it out with Juggernaut. Storm had to help him by any means necessary, but as she ran into the house gravity seemed to turn on its head and Storm levitated into the air and hit the ceiling.

((This of course is where Phoenix begins levitating the house and everything in it. Oh and the Storm moves used in the scene are from a few different places. The spinning move, which was in the film I think they derived from X-Men Legends 2 from a Storm move called “Whirlwind Armor” The lightning fists was a great adding taken from the novel and the electric pulse was taken from X-men Legends 2 as well. A move as I stated in the scene called “Electric Shock.))

More coming soon, hope you guys enjoyed this one too. But Sleepy time now!

EDIT:Come on guys feedback! feedback! I'm eager to know what you think
Don't just read, respond pretty please with suagr on top? lmao

wow very nice

[Clash]

Wow Weather Goddess. You've got quite a talent! More!!!!! ;D

[perfectstormx]

OMFG, I LOVED THE ARCLIGHT PART WHERE STORM FIGHTS HERE PERFECT!!! MORE MORE MORE!!! lol, just a question weather goddess, when storm grabbed her wrists how did arclight land on a car, was it because storm was spinning in a cyclonic fashion?? plz answer
ps- more more!!!!!!!!!!

[xmenlegend09]

Please, I would like to contribute to this fan rewrite. I know Weather Goddess as been doing this exclusively, but I have seriously re-written the entire movie in my head. I would love to take the time to do so. If you do not mind I would like to do a scene. The scene I would like to do is when Cyclops is reunited with Ms. Jean Grey. (My scene happens assuming Cyclops is alive for the latter half of the movie also.)



Cyclops Reunites with the Child of Light

Cyclops arriving at Alkalai Lake, parks his Harley on the side of the road. Upon getting off his bike, he hears Jean's faint voice call him. "Scott...Scott...." Thinking that it's all in his head, he unawaringly walks to the lake and stands on a rock-plateau structure (a'la The Lion King). He overlooks the glistening lake and an empty feeling sinks into his chest. The faint voice calls out "Scott..." Cyclops responds under his breath..."Jean..." The faint voice calls out once more "Scott..." Cyclops frustrated with the voice in his head replies "Stop it..." "Scott..." "Ehh, stop it." Cyclops grows more frustrated and grabs his head as if it his mind was exploding. The voice whispers again:
"Scott..."
"STOP IT!"
"Scott help me..."
"STOP ITTTTTTT!"
Out of rage Cyclops looks to the sky and yells out furiously! He quickly takes off his glasses, opens his eyes, and fires a beam force into the lake creating a mighty distrbance in the water. He pants and slowly puts back on his glasses. Suddenly!, a rumbling in the middle of lake occurs. A funnel of water is created and a beam of bright orange/yellow light emerges from the funnel and shoots straight up into the sky. A massive force of power then creates powerful tides that reach the shore and Cyclops is thrown back and lands on his back. A bright white light soon blares with the intensity of the sun. Even Cyclops is blinded with his glasses on. But through the light he can see a shadowy figure hovering over the lake. The intensity of the light soon weakens and dissipates. Scott looks with a blank stare on his face as if he had just seen a ghost. He stutters "Je--Jean???" Jean is there floating over the lake, her hair glowing bright orange, her eyes like a raging fire. With a goddess like voice, Jean shouts, "I Am Phoenix!!!" A sudden flash of light fills the sky, Jean's eyes turn back to normal as does her hair--and she slowly falls and collaspses into the lake. Scott gasps and without hesitation jumps into lake and swims to a sinking Jean. He dives under the water, grabs her and works his way back to the surface.

The scene quickly goes to a shot of the X-Mansion. Prof.X's mind becomes unstable and horrifying whispers of his mind repeat "Jean, Jean, Jean" over and over again through the halls of the mansion. The students in the begin looking around in a state of confusion. Wolverine runs down the stairs and intercepts Storm running down the hallway.
Storm: "What happened?!?!
Wolverine: "No clue!"
They rush toward the Professor and abruptly open up the door to his room
Storm: Professor?!
He turns around and with a serious tone only says "Get to Alkalai Lake."

The scene goes back to Alkalai lake, Cyclops slowly walks up the shore cradling Jean like a baby. He lays her down on the ground and puts his head to her chest to hear her heart beat. She's alive. He stares in awe at the love of his life magically reborn from a supposed death. Cyclops puts his hand on her face, slowly sliding his fingers down her cheek. Her eyes blink and she awakes.

Quielty she says his name. "Scott."
"Jean...you're alive?--you're alive!" Jean smiles at Cyclops.
Cyclops: "How?"
Pausing for brief moment to think, Jean replies: "...I dunno..."
Jean tries to standup. Cyclops worried goes "Whoa--Whoa, easy."
Jean: "I'm fine."
Cyclops helps her up. They stand face to face and hug each other with the emotion of 2 star-crossed lovers. *The beautiful theme "Whirpool of Love" plays intensifying the emotion of the scene.*
Still hugging:
Cyclops: "I thought I'd lost you forever."
Jean: "...Somethings wrong with me, Scott."
Cyclops: "No, its all okay. You're alive. I thought I'd never get to look into your eyes again."

Pulling away they look at each other and go in for the kiss. The camera pans around the couple dramatically. They stop kissing and immediately hug each other again. The camera shows Jean's face and a strange feeling comes over her. She forceully pulls away from Cyclops. Cyclops grabs her hands and holds them.
Cyclops: "What?"
Jean (scared): "Help me...help me control it."
Cycops (nervously): "Control what?"
Jean (In an evil like manor): "...myself."
The music changes and a shocked Scott looks at Jean in horror.

The scene ends.

[perfectstormx]

WOW!!!! more!!! weather goddess, MORE!!! LOL!! just a question, how did storm grab arclight's wrists and spinned with her? can u explain?