Official X-3 Scenes: Fan Rewrites

[powerfulwizard8888]

Faster, faster!!! I can't wait!!! I love this thread!!!

[perfectstormx]

me too!! where are the rewrites??!!

[powerfulwizard8888]

Lol!!! Where are the rewrites man!!! Fastter please!!!

[perfectstormx]

argh! this thread is dying someone make rewrites!!!!

[cannonball]

the rushed it when wolvie killed phoenix

[perfectstormx]

agreed! now someone make a rewrite of that! LOL!

[xmenlegend09]

Hey, it's been a hot minute but now I'm back again. Sorry it took so long. This is my conclusion to the movie right that goes right after my last re-write. This one was a little hard to put on paper, but if you actually envision it, I think it'll work out well (at least it does to me haha). Hope you enjoy. I'll definitely have a few more re-writes comin...thanks for the support yall.

Home

Camera fades into a shot of Professor Xavier's lone wheelchair in one of the studyrooms. Rogue is standing in the doorway of the room looking into it. Her eyes watering. Iceman comes out into the hallway from another room.
Iceman: "Rogue, you're back."
Rogue: "I, ugh, got here as fast as I could...I can't believe he's actually gone."
Iceman: "I know..."
Iceman looks down at Rogue's hands, she isn't wearing any gloves.
Iceman: "Rogue...?
Rogue: "I'm sorry, I had to."
Iceman: "This isn't what I wanted"
Rogue: "I know that...but, it's what I wanted."
Iceman: "You didn't have to do this."
Rogue: "Bobby, I know I didn't...it was my choice. I did it for me. I'm sorry if--"
Iceman: "Don't be...I understand. I'm happy if you're happy."
Rogue: "Do you think the Professor would be okay with my decision?"
Iceman: "He'd accept you regardless, you're one of us, with or without your power...Rogue, I wanted to tell you this before you took off...I wanted you to know that even though we couldn't touch physically...you had touched my heart anyways."
Rogue: "Bobby..."
They look at each other and hold hands.

Outside the weather is beautiful. The sky is a rich blue and clouds are scattered throughout. In back of the mansion, a funeral is being held. Storm is standing infront of an audience. Rogue, Bobby, Kitty, Peter, Beast, Logan, Scott, and Moira Taggert are in the right front row. Jubilee, Sirun, Johnson "Tv kid", Artie, and a few other students on the left front row. Storm begins to give her speech... Kitty begins to cry a little and Peter holds her hand in comfort. ...Storm finishes the emotional speech. The audience gets up to walk by Charle's memorial. When it gets to Cyclops he drops down to his knees and begins to quietly and emotionally talk to the Professor.
Scott: "Professor...remember when I told you, if anything was to happen to you, I would take care of them and this school...well, I'm not going to break that promise. You and Jean are the reason I am what I am today, I won't let the two of you down. Your dream will live on."
The funeral concludes and he scene fades to black.

In the next scene the camera slowy pans through the mansion going through the hallways and showing various rooms and students.
Storm, Wolverine, Cyclops, and Beast are in one of the rooms sitting down. A female mutant with purple streaks in her hair comes into the room.
Psylocke: "Is there any room here for a person with a change of heart?"
Storm looks up at the Psylocke.
Storm: "As long as you believe in our cause, there always will be....Welcome, my dear. My name is Ororo Monroe, Headmistress of this school...and this is Scott Summers...Headmaster.
Cyclops looks up at Storm and she gives him a reasurring gesture in return.

The next shows the front of the X-mansion. Logan, Ororo, Scott, Hank, Marie, Bobby, Kitty, Peter, and Ben walk out of the front door. They stand together. A cured Jimmy is at the bottom of the stairs and looks at Storm and smiles. Suddenly, a gust of wind is blown towards Jimmy, he soon is lifted into the air. He puts his hands out and begins to fly with the help of Storm's gusts. Angel, spreads his wings and flies into the sky with Leech. Angel and Leech fly through the air above the mansion. Angel flies up higher as if he was flying into the sun. The scene transitions into the scene with Magneto in the park playing chess by himself. He holds out if hand in front of the King chess peice. It slightly moves.

The End.

[perfectstormx]

ooo! that was awesome, hey can someone do one with some rolo??lol

[xmenfan32]

Danger Room

X-men door "BRINGGGG" it opens and you see explosions everywhere. The X-men Storm, Colossus, Shadowcat, Iceman, and Rogue are trying to get to their rendezvous location.(camera goes toward the "sky")Storm is flying in a horizontal position while lasers are being shot at her. She then turns her head back and sees that a missile has be launched in her direction. She changes into a vertical position while still in the air and her eyes uliminate a glowy-white, Storm:"do you know what happens to a missile when it's struck by lightning?" she summons a thunder bolt that hits the missile and it explodes. Smiling at her accomplishment storm is surprised by a second missile headed towards her from the opposite direction, storm turns around just in time to send a second thunder bolt to destroy it, but the force of the explosion knocks her out of the air and send her towards the ground. Iceman immediately sees this and know that he needs to save her before she hit the bottom. Iceman:"colossus, throw me towards storm. I have an idea." Colossus quickly metals up and grabs iceman and throws him. Iceman reaches the unconsious storm and grabs her. He then puts a hand out in front of him and starts forming what he has been calling, an "ice-slide". He slides all the way to the bottom and he comes to a halt. The other young X-men rush to their side. Rogue:"how is she, will she be ok?" Colossus:"yes, she still has a pulse, let's get her and ourselves to safety." Colossus grabs storm and start running for cover, but the thing that is causing all the explosions and the chaos is coming towards them. Rogue:"it's getting closer." Then all of a sudden the fashionably late Jubile joins them. Jubile:"what'd I miss?" Colossus:"this is no time for talk, we have to stop it." Shadowcat:"we can stop it if we work as a team." Colossus:"Yes, your right. Iceman, take jubile on your ice-slide and start hitting the sentinel with everying you got. Rogue, absorb some of storms powers and use them against it as well. Kitty, your coming with me." After he finished the young X-men did what they were told. Colossus metaled up and charged towards the sentinel along with kitty. Colossus started punching it as hard as he could while Shadowcat ran through and messed up the wiring inside of it. Iceman and Jubile were shooting ice-balls and "fireworks" at it from every direction. They had almost beat it but they still needed a bit more power. Rogue comes into sight and she is in the air with her eyes illuminating a white aura, she looks up into the sky and multiple thunderbols come down and hit the sentinel. The sentinel then falls to the ground and the young x-men have completed the simulation. Everying starts vanishing like as if it was never there and they are seen in a massive dome-type structure which is referred to as the Danger Room. The x-door opens and prof-x enter the room. Prof-X:"very good my young x-men, i am very proud of you for working together and defeating the sentinel. this was a defensive and offensive excersise. the offensive being defeating the sentinel and defensive being protecting yourself and Storm". Colossus:"wait a minute, you mean Storm was never injured. She just did it on purpose?" Prof-X:"yes, but she really was unconsious. I let's say, shut her down for a while. She told me that she had enough faith in you guys to keep her safe and out of harm's way." Storm is getting up from the floor. storm:"and I was correct. You guys are truly x-men and you'll do anying to protect people from danger, even if it mean going up against a giant robot." the young x-men give a slight chuckle. They exit the room and start walking down the hall. Kitty:"storm." Storm:"Yes." Kitty:"never do that again." storm smiles.

hope you guys like it!!!

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[cannonball]

"the final battle" wolverine is walking towards the now dark phoenix and is trying to pursuade her to stop then here comes ice man who freezes her then she breaks out then wolverine says " gotta nother plan" actually yeah then kitty and rouge come from under the ground behind dark phoenix and rouge grabs jeans face and then jeans eyes start to turn green and rouges eyes turn black then both of their eyes turn back and kitty takes rouge back under and go near wolvie and rouge starts to levitates and makes jean fly back

[xmenkaroo007]

I love this thread

[perfectstormx]

that's great xfan32!! can someone do one of ROLO?? lol

[Anole]

you know what would have been cool if more x-men went with wolverine to the brotherhood camp so they fought like twice

[perfectstormx]

^^ha ha that would of been cool! now someone incorporate some ROLO. lol

[Anole]

rolo could of been there

[perfectstormx]

^^by the way rumours where, it looked to be true.

[xmenlegend09]

[After the dangeroom sequence scene.]

Hallway Confrontations

Rogue and Iceman enter into the hallway.
Bobby: "Rogue, what's wrong? You seem like you've been avoiding me."
Rogue: "What's wrong is I can't touch my boyfriend without killing him. Other than that, I'm wonderful."
Bobby: "That's not fair."
Rogue: "Niether is flirting with other girls."
Bobby: "What?...wait a minute, Kitty?!"
Rogue: "I'm not gonna compete for you."
Bobby: "Come on now, Rogue, have I ever put any pressure on you?"
Rogue: "You're a guy, Bobby, your mind's only on one thing."
Rogue storms off. Pete walks towards Bobby.
Peter: "What's gotten into her?"
Bobby: "Man, I dunno."
Iceman walks away from Pete.

Cyclops is in his bedroom sitting on his bed as he mourns about Jean's death. Visions of her drowning and calling out his name begin to haunt him. Frustrated with this, Cyclops grabs the bag on his bed, walks out of his room and down the stairs where he's intercepted by Logan.
Logan: "Hey, Scott, what was that back in the danger room?"
Scott: "What do you care?"
Logan: "Well for starters, for someone that's our supposed 'leader', you sure weren't acting like one."
Scott: "I don't have time for your crap, Logan."
Logan: "Look man, I know how you feel..."
Scott: "Don't."
Logan: "...When Jean died--"
Scott: "I said don't! God dammit, you don't know how I feel. You're don't hear her voice. You don't see her screaming for me. The last thing I need is for someone, especially YOU, saying things like that."
Logan: "That's all in your head. Myabe it's time for us to move on."
Cyclops looks at Logan with an angry and annoyed face. He turns around from Logan and walks away, only to take a few steps before he looks back at Logan.
Scott: "Not everyone heals as fast as you Logan."

Cyclops turns the corner of the hallway to go out the main door. Storm then intercepts him.
Storm: "Scott--"
Scott: "Please, just let me go."
Storm: "Scott."
Scott: "What?!
Storm: "I hope you find what you need."
Scott: "Thankyou, tell the Professor I'm leaving for a bit."
Storm: "Right."

Cyclops walks out of the door and Logan approaches Storm.
Logan: "You just let him go?"
Storm: "What was I suppose to do, he just needs time, Logan, why can't you understand that."
Logan: "I do, it's just, we should move on, that's all."
Storm: "Have you?"
Logan: "Yeah, I think I have."
Storm: "Really now..."
Logan: "What? You don't believe me."
Storm: "Well, I know how you felt about her."
Logan: "And she made it clear how she felt about me, alright, so it's done."
Storm: "You sure?"
Logan: "Why do you keep pushing this?"
Storm: "Ugh, nothing, next time just watch what you say to Scott."
Storm walks away and Logan gives her a weird look.

[Cut to Beast introduction's scene, the Mystique's scene and then back to the Mansion]

Professor X, Kitty, Jubilee, Jones, Siryn and other teenage students are in a classroom. Professor begins his lecture.
Professor X: "When an individual acquires great power, the use or misuse of that power is everything. Will it be for the greater good or will it be used for personal or destructive ends? Now this is a question that we must all ask ourselves. Why, because we are mutants. For psyhics, this presents a particular problem. When is it acceptable to use our power and when do we cross that invisible line that turns us into tyrants over our fellow man."
Kitty: "But Einstein said, that ethics were a exclusive human concern, without...any superhuman authority behind it."
Professor X: "Einstein wasn't a mutant...so far as we know."
The students chuckle.
Jubilee: "Coulda fooled me, especially with that hair."
Students chuckle.
Professor X: "All jokes aside, now, Jubilee. This case study was sent to me by a colleague of mine, Dr. Moira McTaggert.
Professor looks at Jones.
Professor X: "Jones"
Jones turns out the tv with a blink of an eye. The video plays and afterwards the Professor continues his lecture.
Professor X: "...How are we to decide what falls within the range of ethical behavior and what..."
The Professor stops talking and out of the window the sky is becoming dark.
Jubilee: "Yoo-hoo..."
Jones: "Um, Professor?"
Professor X: "We'll continue this tomorro. Class dismissed."
Jubilee (under her breath): "Yesss..."
The students get the books and prepare to leave.

Outside on the balcony, Storm is standing alone looking out into the sky as it grows darker. A worried look is on her face as her hair blows in the wind.
Professor X: "The forecast was for sunny skies."
Storm quickly turns around as Professor approaches her.
Storm: "Oh, I'm sorry."
Storm looks up into the hair as her eyes fade to white and the clouds dissipate from the sky allowing for sunlight to breach through.
Professor X: "I don't have to be psyhic to know when somethings bothering you."

Storm and Professor take a walk through the hallway.
Storm: "I don't understand. Magneto's a fugitive. We have mutant in the cabinet--a President that who understands us. Why are we still hiding?"
Professor X: "We're not hiding. We still have enemies out there. And I must protect my students you know that."
Storm: "Yes, but we can't be students forever."
ProfessorX: "Ahaha, Storm, I haven't thought of you as my student for years. In fact, I thought that perhaps you might take my place one day."
Storm: "But, Scott's a--?"
Professor: "Scott's a changed man. He took Jean's death so hard. I have to someone that's going to be there for the students.
Storm: "You know Scott believes in your dream full-fledged."
Professor: "I do, but I can't take chances. Yes, things are out better out there, but you of all people know how fast the weather can change."
Storm: "There's something you're not telling us."
The Professor sighs.
Professor: "We'll talk later, someone has returned home."

[Of course that's Beast and the scene continues as it was.]

Hope you liked the little hint about the Rolo factor. I'm workin on more, so I hope you enjoyed this one.

[perfectstormx]

ooooooooooooooooo! sounds good. now let's cut to the end when logan is about the get to DP and storm is scared and add it in. lmao

[windsurfer8290]

This story starts off after the battle on Alcatraz. Here we go:


The X-Men come back into the mansion beat up and tired from the battle that they just endured. While the X-Men are going up to their rooms Kitty stops Bobby to talk.
Kitty: "Are you alright?"
Bobby: "Yeah why?"
Kitty: "That was your best friend back there, what if he didn't make out alive?"
Bobby: "Well today he made me realize that we aren't friends anymore, and I kind of have doubts we were truly friends to begin with. To be honest it does hurt to have to do that to my old friend. I guess thats how the Professor felt about Magneto."
Kitty: "Yeah I guess it is. I'm gonna be honest, I was scared to death."
Bobby: "Why?"
Kitty: "You try having a guy that big coming at you at top speed and you can't use your powers, you'd be scared too."
(They laugh a little before Bobby notices Peter coming toward them.)
Peter: "Sorry if I'm interupting something, I just need to tell Bobby something."
Kitty: No Peter it's alright, why don't I meet you in your room and we can talk about what happened on Alcatraz."
Peter: That sounds really good. Be up in a sec.
Kitty: Don't take long. (says as she smiles a flirtty smile at him)
Peter: I won't. (he says while blushing very noticiblly)
[Kitty walks out to go up to her room]
Bobby: So you and Kitty?
Peter: Well, sorta we're in the talking stage right now.
Bobby: Good I'm happy for you, Kitty is a good person, I know she will make you very happy.
Peter: Thanks I think so too.
Bobby: So what did you want to talk to me about?
Peter: Well I just wanted to let you know Rogue is back.
Bobby: SHE IS! Where is she?!
Peter: In her room waiting for you.
Bobby: Thanks Pete!
Peter: No problem!
[Bobby runs to Rogues room]
As he approaches her room he slows down to catch his breath so he doesn't seem like he has been fretting and worrying about her since he discovered she was gone. (Even though he was.) He walks to the room, his heart pounding heavily. He looks in the room to see Rogue sitting on her bed. As she looks over she sees him and sits up. You can see a bit of happiness and nervousness at the same time on her face.

Bobby: Your back.
Rogue stands up to look him in the eye.
Rogue: I'm sorry, I had to. I couldn't live like that.
Bobby looks down to see her hands are gloveless.
Bobby: This isn't what I-
Rpgue: I had to, I'm sorry Bobby this is me. I didn't do it for anybody but me. I know that you can understand that and live with it... Now tell me everything that happened on Alcatraz!
Rogue puts her hand out and he puts his hand in her and she quickly sits on the bed.
Bobby: Ok, but first I want to say, I love you Marie.
Rogue: I love you too Bobby, but please...
Rogue barely touches his cheek with the palm of her hand, and when she moves her hand from his cheek it is revealed that Bobby now has frost on his cheek. Rogue:... call me Rogue.
Bobby smiles, then you can see that he is thinking.
Bobby: If you didn't take the cure then where did you go.
You see Rogue thinking about what it is that she did. You then see a blond haired woman with a black mask and blue outfit with a single gold lightning bolt down her chest.



[Fades out]
You then see a black haired woman sitting on her bedroom floor thinking about the things she did in her past. And now trying to come to the realization that the past is over and that she has to move on. She reaches to scratch her arm. Then she does it once more. Until suddenly she realizes that she is itching all over. She stands up thinking it is a rash from the carpet until she looks in the mirror to see this newly born yellow eyed, red haired woman with reptialian blue skin staring back at her. She smiles to herself.
Mystique: I'M BACK!!!
[Fades out]
Magneto is sitting in a park chair playing chess with himself until a blond woman with beautiful blue eyes sits down across from him.
Woman: Do you mind if I join you?
Magneto: I'm sorry young lady this is a game for an old man who has lost his one and only reason for living.
Woman: What did you lose?
Magneto: Never you mind yourself with that. Now if you'll excuse me.
Magneto stands up and starts to walk away from the chess board and the woman.
Woman: Eric.
A familiar voice to Magneto's ears. He almost falls to his knees from the shock of hearing that voice again. He slowly turns around to find the blue skinned shapeshifter he knew and loved.
Magneto: Mys... Mys... Mystique!
Mystique: I'm back. And I think you might be too.
Magneto smiles and then reaches his hand out and all metal in the park starts to gravitating around both Magneto and Mystique.
Mystique: I guess the old duo is back once more.
Pyro: Make that a trio.
Pyro is a shock to the both of them, They thought they would never see him again.
[Fades out]
The mansion is shaking and everyone runs out to the grave site for protection only to discover that is the cause of the rumbling. There are blinding lights that are coming from all over. The light is there for nothing less than 10 minutes. As the light dims there are three faces there. Jean Grey, Scott Sommers, and Professor Charles Xavier. Finally they were the full X-Men team once more.


Jean Grey and Professor X: Mutation. It is the key to our evolution. It has enabled us to evolve from a single-celled organism into the dominant species on the planet. This process is slow and normally taking thousands and thousands of years. But every few hundred millennia, evolution leaps forward.

[jak13phoenix]

This is the part when Jean has floated down on2 the pile of rubble but she isnt killing any1 (Cyclops is still alive and him, Angel+Rogue hav joined the final fight. Plus they didnt inject the cure in2 Mags, Rogue just grabed his face an knocked him out. And Rogue didnt take the cure)

Wolverine: Jean! Don't do this!
Storm then flys down, lands next to Wolvie and yells "There's no point Logan! Shes going to destroy everything!"
Iceman, Rogue, Kitty, Colossus, Cyclops and Angel run up to them
Cyclops: JEEEAAANNNN!!!! PLEASE! DON'T DO THIS!
Then door to Worthington Labs behind them bursts open and Psylocke, Quill and Archlight run out but then stop and stare at Phoenix in shock
Psylocke: What the hell is happening!?
Quill: That b*tch has gone psyco!
Archlight: We don't have time for this!
Archlight then shoots a concussive blast at Phoenix but she easily blocks it and then she lifts up her hand and Archlight is lifted off her feet.
Psylocke: AARRCCHHLLIIGGHHTT!!!!!
The X Men then look up in horror to see Archlight been slowly pulled towards Phoenix
Wolverine: ROGUE! She must have some metal on her! Bring her down!
Rogue: I'm on it!
Rogue then points her hands at Archlight and tries to bring her down but the power of the Phoenix is too strong!
Phoenix: You DARE try and harm ME!?
Archlight: Do your best! I'm not afraid to die!
Colossus then launches Wolvie at Phoenix but he is suspended in mid air
Phoenix: You shall suffer the same fate as this one!
Wolverine: I think not
Cyclops: NOW!!!
All the X Men then start to attack Phoenix. Storm floats up and shoots lightning at her. Rogue floats up and launches cars and trucks at her. Cyclops blasts her with a huge optic blast. Psylocke throws psycic knives at her. Quill shoots loads of spikes at her and Colossus launches Shadowcat at her.
Wolverine: KITTY! Knock her out!
Shadowcat: On it!!!
Everything hits Phoenix at once but the sheild defends her but Kitty can phase through anything so the psycokinetic shield that Phoenix has made is easy for her to get through. Kitty then punches Phoenix in the face and they both plumet down toward the ground.
Cylclops: Angel!!!
Angel then swoops under them and catches them both. Wolverine and Archlight then drop to the floor.
Storm: We need to put the mental shields up while she's still unconcious! Is there a telepath here!?
Psylocke: I'm one! What do you want me to do!?
Cyclops: Make some psycic barriers to trap the Phoenix in the corner of Jean's mind so it cannot brake free!
Psylocke: Okay!
Psylocke then closes her eyes and starts to concentrate
Psylocke: AAAAARRRRRRGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Storm: She can't handle it!
Cyclops: She can! She must!
Then a huge psycic butterfly appears around Psylocke's head and then it dissappears and she falls to the ground
Wolverine: Did you do it?
Psylocke: Yes, but you will need someone more powerful to make the barriers perminent
Cyclops: Thank you so much!!!
Psylocke: My pleasure
Storm: You seem to have immense power and responsibility. Would you like to join the X Men?
Psylocke: But, I'm a baddie! I didn't think you would want me on your team!?
Storm: Everyone's welcome!
Psylocke: Then yes, I will join.