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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Jul 25, 2006 19:49:08 GMT -5
Ok
Logan: I think she killed scott.
Storm: That cant be.
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Logan: She finaly killed scott.
Storm *thinking* OMG im next on the will. YES!
Prof X: I herd that! you ****.
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Post by perfectstormx on Jul 25, 2006 21:44:53 GMT -5
rofl phoenix girl! im getting ideas for a dark phoenix vs. storm battle, any suggestions, make it practical please.
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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Jul 25, 2006 22:20:34 GMT -5
Well storm could use some fog and attack Jean from the back, Jean scences her and uses her Tk to stop her. Storm is smashed against the ground brutaly. Knowing she cant give up she gets on her feet and flie's into the air, her eyes zoom white and the battle beggins. Theres fire and lightning everywhere, energy from both god's crashing into the air making huge power waves knocking everyone down.
Could go something like that.
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Post by Psylocke 4 ever on Jul 26, 2006 8:02:23 GMT -5
give a lot of detail 2. not 2 short unless meaningful
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Post by perfectstormx on Jul 26, 2006 10:34:02 GMT -5
^^yeah that sounds really good phoenix girl, but please tell a little more and add in some dialogue, and i will give you credit for helping me!  i noticed ur avatar has storm vs. Dark Phoenix so i knew u might know some good stuff. |
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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Jul 26, 2006 10:36:08 GMT -5
Hehe ok Let me think. When i write something good I usualy have to think about it and write it down. Ill post itin a couple of hours.
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Post by perfectstormx on Jul 26, 2006 10:38:48 GMT -5
Ok thanks Phoenixgirl, but use what u already had! it's awesome!
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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Jul 26, 2006 10:39:30 GMT -5
Ok here it it is.
As the sky darkens both goddesses’ prepare themselves for the fight of their lives.
(Storm raises her hands and starts forming her eyes white as the weather goddess rises from her feet into the sky.)
(Jean immediately step’s back and a huge power gave came clashing at her, her eyes dissolved into a black matter and the fight begun)
(Suddenly the water that surrounded the island rose into the air.)
Storm Rose higher into the air and spun several times closer to Jean then she stopped and she released a small but powerful world wind that hit the ground coming straight to Jean. As it rose closer the world wind doubled in size.
(The world wind hit the location where Jean stood causing a huge and tragic explosion leaving nothing to se seen.)
Relived of the danger Storm came to the ground thinking everything was over.
“Did you think it was going to be this easy” A voice said.
(Jean rose from the ashes with not even a scratch on her face)
(She started to walk to Storm but in fright Storm stepped back every time that Jean got closer)
“Jean?”
“I am no longer the living person you once knew, I am fire and life incarnated, I am Phoenix!”
“Why are you dong this, let us help you”
“I’ve lived my entire life caged in the back of this body’s mind and I’m not going back.”
(Jean had caught up to Storm by this time and they were standing face to face)
Jean put her hand up and using her Telekinesis she picked Storm from for feet into the air.
“I can’t breath”
“Die”
(Storms eyes turned white once again as she released a huge bold of electricity from her hand directly to Jean, sending her back several feet)
“What? You thought I was going to give up without a fight
“You’re better off just running to your precious x-men Storm”
“A good defense is a good offence.”
(Both X-girls walk closer to each other and put up their hands at the same time sending out fire and lightning. Both powers collide and there’s a small explosion.
Then Jean gets bored and she turns Storm to dust lol. Well if it was the movie that’s what would have happened. But I don’t know what to do next. Maybe you can come up with another part because it seems like there’s is no way for storm to beat Jean.
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Post by xmenfan32 on Jul 26, 2006 11:50:52 GMT -5
maybe, jean get's angry and frustrated and sends a huge telekinetic push towards storm and storm goes flying backwards crashing against a wall knocking her unconsious. Jean:"pathetic x-men". then jean starts demolucarizing everying. the x-men rush to storm's side because she regaining consious.Storm:"she needs to be stopped". Wolverine:"i'm the only one who can get to her".Storm:"what about all these people, they need to get to safety?"Wolverine:"Storm, trust me. Get these people to safety". Storm's eyes illuminate white and she descends up into the sky to aid the people. As so do the other X-men as well, except for Wolverine who knows that he needs to get to jean and stop her. even if it means killing her.
And that's when wolverine get's to jean blah blah blah something about i love you blah blah blah thank you blah THE END.
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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Jul 26, 2006 11:59:50 GMT -5
Yea that works lol.
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Post by perfectstormx on Jul 26, 2006 15:26:42 GMT -5
Ok time for my Phoenix vs. Storm: Storm vs. the Dark Phoenix
(Scene where everyone is running away)
Wolverine: STORM!
Storm: I must do this Logan, it's the only way.
(Storm rises to the night sky, her cape waving in the wind, Dark Phoenix rises to the challenge and rises into the sky)
Dark Phoenix: You are closer than a sister to me Storm, but I won't hestitate to strike you down."
Storm: JEAN! I don't want to do this, none of us do. Please let us help you.
Dark Phoenix: NEVER AGAIN! I AM FIRE AND LIFE INCARNATE FOREVER! I AM PHOENIX!
(DP sends a blast of telekineses and sends Storm backwards, Storm then summons gail force winds. And then shoots lighting at DP, then Jean blocks it with a bubble of telekinses. Storm then flys behind Jean and Storm grabs her!)
Storm: Im sorry Jean, I love you!
Dark Phoenix: HAHAHA! Fool!!
(DP sends a blast of telekinses and storm falls to the ground to be caught by Logan) This is where Logan takes over, etc etc. |
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Post by xmenfan32 on Jul 26, 2006 17:07:16 GMT -5
yeah i like it, the only thing i would change is where storm says i love you to jean,it might just be me but it sounds a little weird. i was thinking she could say, Storm:"i'm sorry, sister". but that my opinion, i still liked either way.
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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Jul 26, 2006 17:51:32 GMT -5
Lol yea the I love you doesnt sound right. Give that to logan.
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Post by perfectstormx on Jul 26, 2006 18:40:18 GMT -5
yeah ur right, something like you were always my sister. but im still happy u loved it.
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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Jul 26, 2006 21:30:16 GMT -5
It's sad to say were smarter then FOX. This would have been so much better.
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Post by Psylocke 4 ever on Jul 27, 2006 7:38:27 GMT -5
i wudnt include sister part doesnt sound right. and im gonna do a rewrite again soon after my off the hook juggy kitty showdown. but i dont know wot to rewrite yet
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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Jul 27, 2006 10:11:24 GMT -5
Yea. I mean Storm was pissed at Jean in the movie i dont think she would say that.
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Post by xmenfan32 on Jul 27, 2006 10:47:46 GMT -5
well i think she could because it would be a really emotional moment and storm would remember everying she's been through with her and that they were like sisters before any of this ever happened.
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Post by perfectstormx on Jul 27, 2006 11:55:32 GMT -5
^^exactly my next rewrite will be some cool storm fighting in the final battle. any suggestions?
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Post by Phoenix~Gal on Jul 27, 2006 14:22:59 GMT -5
Uhhh, storm vs toad again lol.
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